Nothing can ever substitute the place that you hold,
creating a void in a whole,
nothing replenishes the thoughts,
of your words that shone…
within the darkness of my depths,
that formed when you left me alone.
Who else can I look upon,
in times of distress and warmth,
for you’re the only soul close to me,
who could feel my breath and heart…
Clinging to you or possessing you,
I don’t have any such wish,
just a touch of care and love,
that is what I ever dreamt …
Interrupting your schedule
of work and duties,
is never on my mind,
I just want to be beside you in the struggles dominating your time…
Still if my words hurt you..
and my feelings put you in pain,
I will stay away from your shadow …
But nothing can ever interchange your place …
Its like you wrote the thoughts in my mind. beautiful poem.
thank you dear
Touched my heart….
Lovely expression…
Noopur
http://apparitionofmine.blogspot.in/
Thank you Noopur for being here and enjoying!
So very touching.
Thank you Millie!
Wonderful Poem And Thanks for friending me on facebook!
Thank you Jasmine! my pleasure!
Your so welcome. Your son won an award he’s a beautiful boy. I can’t wait to see my son grow that big. He’s almost 3!
Ya! he did in a cricket tournament! you too shall enjoy ur son’s growing up !
Well if my son grows up to be a fine young man like yours I am sure to be a proud mother!
he will for sure! 🙂 for he has u as a wonderful mom!
Your to kind!!! Thanks!
I will stay away from your shadow …
But nothing can ever interchange your place
These few words sum up the whole. This is beautiful
Thank you dear! u caught the real one!
Beautiful as always.
Love,
mie
Thank you Mei for the love and your wonderful presence.
touching…
thank you
Loving till letting go of every distance except that to your red…. nicely expressed Soumya
Love & Light
Thank you Mira for ur Love
nothing replenishes the thoughts ….
very nice and close to the heart.
thank you !