Written for TRIFECTA CHALLENGE!
http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2013/03/trifecta-week-sixty-nine.html
Intoxicated air filled the mind
with thoughts amorous
Mystifying eyes had mesmerized
the heart conscious.
***
Her presence magical
charmed the Spartan
Love is the felon
that infects everyone!
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soumyav 
The man “shackled and crowned” is talking about in “just Drink”, is my husband. He is sober and healthy. She still writes about reunting with him oneday, while supposedly getting engaged to her boyfriend. He dumped her 3 yrs ago and stil won’t stop.It is hard for me to see her accept an award for wanting someone to “fall of the wagon.” Yes it’s art, but we are talking about someones sobriety. She once wrote she wanted to push him off the wagon. Seems unethical.
First of all Thanks Heidi for being here! I neither know her personally nor you! Here it is a different world of expressions where we try to express our emotions or thoughts,or views. We appreciate a person on basis of the written word and not by personal nature ,for no one knows their real nature.The process of writing is always elf healing and has helped several who have suffered or been victimized or are floating with arrogance… My appreciation is for the words that I read and it stays away from personal feelings! You are welcome here my friend as much as she is! Best wishes!
“Love is the felon
that infects everyone! ”
This is seriously good, Soumyav…! 🙂
Thanks Carolyn! 🙂
Oh this is very very good Soumyav.
Thank you Sheri ! the prompt was “infect” .could not think of anything else.
Different one.
Hmm! A prompt always brings out different shades!
it is true 🙂
🙂 Glad Gys you liked it!
love certainly is infectious sometimes, and a blessed infection it is!
🙂 🙂 true Sharmishtha
Hehe…love as a felon – nice 🙂
🙂 sometimes it does ! 😉
For a Spartan love is a bad felon indeed… 🙂
🙂 Caught the real line and thought, Bjorn!
‘Amorous thoughts’ are praiseworthy.
🙂 Thank you Sir for your thoughts as well
Love and felon! sounds like uneasy bedfellows.
🙂 nice comprehension
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Wow! Thank you Gys ! you are showering me wth awards! I suppose I wont have words left to thank u now
Lovely 🙂
Thank you Madhu
I totally agree. When you love individuals, it does infect 😉
🙂 Glad to see you enjoying!
Infectious love – romance…the thrill..the beginning..warm and fuzzy. Kudos to you Soumyav.
Thank you dear for the visit and Iam really happy that you liked
Love as a felon… intriguing thought.
🙂 Yes Sandra! it is intriguing !
You’ve handled the prompt very well Soumya – well done. Your love shines through, Eric 🙂
:-):-) Thank you Eric! I know its perfectly done now,as I hear from you!
GORGEOUS! Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece.
🙂 So nice to see you here and reading this! Welcome dear
I love this! very good writing.
🙂 Thank you so much
Beautiful.
Thank you Katherine for being here and liking this!
Thank you Katherine for being here and liking this!
I like the subtle rhymes in some of the lines (:
Thanks a lot
I enjoyed your poem. Shows you not a multitude of words are required to make a point.
Thank you Sini!
Love is the felon, ha! Made me think of ‘love is the drug I’m thinking of’.
🙂 It always sparks more thoughts !
Beautiful.
Thank you so much!
Reblogged this on lost creek publishing.
Thanks for reblogging!
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BE ENCOURAGED! BE BLESSED!
Thank you dear and it was my pleasure