Within the unfold petals of time,
the eternal fragrance is contained since infinity,
the pollens of thought get scattered away …
with the sway of wind, stings of bees,
feathers of birds in different ways…
like the intellects chase knowledge and go astray…
The mind of anther still isn’t ripe,
to contain within…
the real feelings of time…
shielded by thick curtains of ego,
it remains always beside….
The stigma , when perceives,
by the stimulus of the touch,
in the senses of the flower,
the petals tend to unfurl their folds,
radiating the real flora…
Whose touch it was!
the innocent flower imagines…
It was the eternal magical touch…
which pushed it on the path divine…
Until then it lay foolishly,
scattering the pollens in different directions,
unwisely it had foreclosed
the doors of its precious anther.
The moment the light dawned upon..
the floral contours of the flower,
It shined and reflected the aura …
of a divine communion….
Ohhhh…this is so beautiful and well done!
Thank you so much David! Iam really happy you liked it..
Wow! Such delicacy and sweetness for the soul. Great way to start my day.
Thanks MIllie! indeed have a blessed day ahead!
this is one of your very best soumyav. an amazing poem capturing the beauty of lotus!
Thanks Sharmishtha and must say your post of soul devourers… inspired to write this…
well that makes me really happy 🙂
Nicely painted..
Peace & Light
Thank you Mira!
When i embrace your words each day, i always feel like i share a pure sweet communion with the spirit of your heart. Your words have life and they soothe all that lives within, bringing a certain peace. Your poem is like a rare flower my sister…beautiful and nourishing in every way. Thanks for the blessing this morning that you shared with us all…your light will stay throughout the day!
Thanks for all your wishes and blessings Wendell! its my soul that speaks out in form of words ,which felt by heart and thought by mind…Iam glad it brightens and spreads happiness.
Beautifully rendered. A touch of divine in your words reflects…
Thank you So much Hemant!
Mm, perhaps the bud will bloom after all… 🙂
🙂
Aren’ t you an artist with your words, my friend?! Fragrant beauty!
🙂 🙂 thts a sweet compliment Esenga! 🙂
I loved the way you metaphorised the flower and its blossoming with that of Love! 🙂
Thanks again ! 🙂
Wonderful choice of words!
Makes me wonder if I should work hard on my vocabulary skills !!
Well done Soumya!
Thank you Sakshi!
“Whose touch it was!
the innocent flower imagines…
It was the eternal magical touch…
which pushed it on the path divine…” one word will have to suffice: ‘beautiful!’
Thank you so much!
Such a botanical poem dear! 🙂
But seriously…..the entire poetry is so beautifully metaphorical….for me it had several layers to it.
“Like the intellects chase knowledge and go astray…” What an insightful thought you have captured in words.Your poems are always so diverse and colorful…..filled with imagination and genius.
I am more encouraged when readers like you enjoy and find it interesting and inspiring.when they feel its worth and stop for a while to think about it.Its worth thinking those thoughts and expressing them in words.