As a traveller I roam and move,

to the  destination miles apart,

I come across through different places,

with various distinct landscapes…


Nature blossoming somewhere,

another land  dries lying dead…

Rivers gushing with splendid force,

Also sandy deserts where it rains…


Land of civilizations sparkling,

far away…

barren with  drought

the fields despair…


Races mixed with different genres,

moving past , frictioning ,

Bloodpath somewhere is flooded …

in another corner of the earth…


Varied people I have met,

Their eyes do speak  the thoughts within,


swindlers,frauds conning…

Some steal money,

some peace of mind,

dignity snatched somewhere,

crushed is the genuineness sublime…


What frustration they carry,

why such confusion in minds,

what is the gem they are seeking,

killing the conscious benigned  smile…


Every soul a different reflection,

Still they are sons and daughters of the same Creator Divine…

What makes them  go in unlike ways,

few becoming human,

some going astray…

What shall make them

moveth forth

on the path of  righteousness …

Stop for a while ..

O! MY Lord!

to dawn them with your consciousness.


46 thoughts on “IAM A TRAVELLER!

  1. Wendell A. Brown January 9, 2013 / 12:12 am

    Your psalm was beautifully written and shines radiantly with a strong true message…I loved every word that your spirit and heart shared! God bless Soumyav!

    • soumyav January 9, 2013 / 8:45 am

      Thank you Wendell for the wonderful thought you shared here ! Its always great to have your wishes

  2. Subashini January 9, 2013 / 12:20 am

    Lovely! A genuine plead against violence and violations is what I see in these verses. Brilliantly woven.

    • soumyav January 9, 2013 / 8:46 am

      Thank you Subashini! True sometimes our heart just speaks out!

  3. lgyslaine January 9, 2013 / 12:25 am

    Beautiful writing on all the excesses

    • soumyav January 9, 2013 / 8:47 am

      Its really good to see you Gys enjoying my lines!

    • soumyav January 9, 2013 / 8:47 am

      Thank you Neeraj! Its so good to see you here

      • Neeraj January 9, 2013 / 11:52 am

        Its a pleasure to be here 🙂

  4. Christy Birmingham January 9, 2013 / 12:56 am

    I like that your conscious to see the world around you in all its beauty!

    • soumyav January 9, 2013 / 8:49 am

      We just have that Christy,if we can’t find happiness and beauty around,rest of things just seem temporary!

    • soumyav January 9, 2013 / 8:49 am

      Iam happy Millie you liked it!

  5. muZer January 9, 2013 / 3:04 am

    “Every soul a different reflection,
    Still they are sons and daughters of the same Creator Divine…”
    So true we are all so similar yet so different!

    • soumyav January 9, 2013 / 8:50 am

      Yes Muzer! this distinctness should be our uniqueness and not a reason of discrimination.

  6. midnighthues January 9, 2013 / 5:54 am

    Nature vs. nurture depicted eloquently Soumya!

    • soumyav January 9, 2013 / 8:51 am

      Thank you Aparna! wonderful to see your nice new gravatar image!

  7. shivprasad January 9, 2013 / 8:30 am

    I think its something like, for every well doing, there should be someone to retract it. In fact for every single kind hearted, we find many who never have the same. May by because of this the person was true & has some values or has made some beliefs on other. It’s like we human were able to differentiate between the two, then only someone trust worthy was recognizable.

    But whatever it is, as you said, its also important, that how would one nurture these people and change their mind indeed

    • soumyav January 9, 2013 / 8:52 am

      Thanks for getting in the depth! INdeed its important how to maintain the balance!

    • soumyav January 9, 2013 / 9:21 am

      Thank you NIrav! Iam happy you liked and felt the depth!

  8. sakshivashist January 9, 2013 / 12:26 pm

    Well versed, this one… simple and worth thinking about.

  9. ajaytao2010 January 9, 2013 / 1:52 pm

    Aap ki kavita ke liye itna hi kahunga, aap ke bhitar baithe parmatma ko mera namaskar

      • ajaytao2010 January 9, 2013 / 3:57 pm

        aap pur to parmatma ki krapa hai, hum to sirf dua karte hain

    • soumyav January 9, 2013 / 2:41 pm

      Thank you Vikram ! Its great to hear from you!

  10. Bikramjit Singh Mann January 9, 2013 / 3:30 pm

    it is an art to be able to write what the HEART says and you sure have that talent ..
    a lovely poem

    on a tangent .. a Traveller is lucky they get to experience so much and learn so much in the travels

    • soumyav January 9, 2013 / 6:09 pm

      Thank you Bikram for the lovely words ! Iam glad you could feel the journey

    • soumyav January 9, 2013 / 10:32 pm

      Thank you Nirmal!

  11. nightlake January 10, 2013 / 4:39 am

    seen from the eyes of a traveller..different people with different mindsets..a lovely poem

    • soumyav January 10, 2013 / 8:44 am

      Thank you dear! Yes it does give us a different perspective !

  12. Indira January 10, 2013 / 5:47 pm

    Written beautifully. I have to struggle for writing even 3/4 lines. You write so well.

    • soumyav January 10, 2013 / 6:02 pm

      I feel so honoured hearing this from you! Thank you!

    • soumyav January 11, 2013 / 2:00 pm

      Yes! continously on the move! seeing the world like a traveller

    • soumyav January 11, 2013 / 2:00 pm

      Yes! continously on the move! seeing the world like a traveller

  13. Manu Kurup January 14, 2013 / 5:29 pm

    Beautiful poem 🙂

    • soumyav January 14, 2013 / 10:29 pm

      Thank you for gng thru all the poems Manu!

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