close enough to hear your breath,

warmed by your feelings affectionate,

cruising on the sail of life,

in your arms in darkness of the night.

enchanting melodies sway my locks,

your graceful touch embraces the fall,

drowning in the emotions flooded,

my heart sings an amorous song!

floating in the land of fantasy,

coming back to the reality,

i find myself in your embrace

sleeping calmly …

in the echoes of the  LIED!


LIED:( german art or  love song!)



33 thoughts on “GERMAN LIED

    • soumyav January 31, 2013 / 10:38 am

      thank you Shiv! By the way you can check the meaning of ‘LIED’ at the bottom!:-)

  1. sakshivashist January 31, 2013 / 10:54 am

    And yes, the last line was the most important😀

    • soumyav January 31, 2013 / 11:01 am

      Thank you Saakshi!

    • soumyav January 31, 2013 / 12:24 pm

      Thank you dear and I knew you would like it! by the way saw the photos u uploaded on fb,are beautiful!

  2. purpleraysblog January 31, 2013 / 2:20 pm

    Poor me! I kept looking for the ‘lie’ and almost missed the beauty in the song. Good piece

    • soumyav January 31, 2013 / 5:18 pm

      :-):-) Thts sad! I had written their at the end …about ” lied”. seems the climax was an opposite of wht you expected!

    • soumyav January 31, 2013 / 5:19 pm

      more lovely to see you here reading this!:-)

  3. Eric January 31, 2013 / 10:59 pm

    Very well-written romantic and sensual poem, Soumya!😀 Eric

    • soumyav February 1, 2013 / 12:54 am

      Thanks Eric,glad you like dit!

  4. muZer January 31, 2013 / 11:29 pm

    Aah! Such a nice and beautiful poem, Soumya.. And love the title too..:-)

    • soumyav February 1, 2013 / 12:54 am

      :-):-) thank u dear

  5. Blood-Ink-Diary February 1, 2013 / 3:13 am

    Sublime and most engaging. Loved it Soumyav! Shukria dost. Cheers.

    • soumyav February 1, 2013 / 6:46 pm

      Iam so overwhelmed and happy you liked it shaheen!

    • soumyav February 1, 2013 / 6:47 pm

      Thank you so much !

  6. 12kilroy February 1, 2013 / 9:27 pm

    I like this. I read your title as the past tense of “lie” – and I was pretty far into the poem before I realized. But it was a pleasant surprise.

    • soumyav February 1, 2013 / 10:44 pm

      :-):-) so the mystery took you into the depth and by the time you realized ,the poem was over! sorry for that! but good you enjoyed it as a pleasant surprise!

  7. tornadoday February 3, 2013 / 6:08 am

    …………..exquisite, and I love the ‘hook’ of the lie (the meaning not what we expected to find)……….and I’m so glad, for initially, it broke my heart. :) ~ Love to you, my dear one. ~ Bobbie

    • soumyav February 3, 2013 / 9:43 am

      :-) I guess everyone who started reading the poem had a mindset to find the “LIE” …and in the end,the climax just wiped off everything! Thanks dear that you still liked it!

  8. elamany February 4, 2013 / 12:58 pm

    peace of fine art.

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