close enough to hear your breath,
warmed by your feelings affectionate,
cruising on the sail of life,
in your arms in darkness of the night.
enchanting melodies sway my locks,
your graceful touch embraces the fall,
drowning in the emotions flooded,
my heart sings an amorous song!
floating in the land of fantasy,
coming back to the reality,
i find myself in your embrace
sleeping calmly …
in the echoes of the LIED!
LIED:( german art or love song!)
soumyav 
nice one soumya…
thank you Shiv! By the way you can check the meaning of ‘LIED’ at the bottom! 🙂
Superb!
And yes, the last line was the most important 😀
Thank you Saakshi!
Feels like a dream. 🙂
🙂 🙂
Beautiful.
Thank you dear and I knew you would like it! by the way saw the photos u uploaded on fb,are beautiful!
so full of love and beauty!
🙂 thank u
Oooooooh, so romantic!
🙂 thank you dear and great to see you here!
Ditto, beautful!
sooooooooo romantic!! 🙂
Thanks Vinay! 🙂
Poor me! I kept looking for the ‘lie’ and almost missed the beauty in the song. Good piece
🙂 🙂 Thts sad! I had written their at the end …about ” lied”. seems the climax was an opposite of wht you expected!
It’s beautiful again! 🙂
more lovely to see you here reading this! 🙂
Very well-written romantic and sensual poem, Soumya! 😀 Eric
Thanks Eric,glad you like dit!
Aah! Such a nice and beautiful poem, Soumya.. And love the title too.. 🙂
:-):-) thank u dear
Sublime and most engaging. Loved it Soumyav! Shukria dost. Cheers.
Iam so overwhelmed and happy you liked it shaheen!
lovely one Soumya 🙂
Thank you so much !
I like this. I read your title as the past tense of “lie” – and I was pretty far into the poem before I realized. But it was a pleasant surprise.
🙂 🙂 so the mystery took you into the depth and by the time you realized ,the poem was over! sorry for that! but good you enjoyed it as a pleasant surprise!
…………..exquisite, and I love the ‘hook’ of the lie (the meaning not what we expected to find)……….and I’m so glad, for initially, it broke my heart. 🙂 ~ Love to you, my dear one. ~ Bobbie
🙂 I guess everyone who started reading the poem had a mindset to find the “LIE” …and in the end,the climax just wiped off everything! Thanks dear that you still liked it!
peace of fine art.
🙂 Thank you!