Forgetting the promise to be back soon,
You got busy in your errands till noon,
Waiting till the dusk with rays of hope,
Like the designs of a kaleideoscope…
Twilight dimmed the hope of sight,
As darkness engulfed the lonely night….
Words for you I had kept,
In the golden chest in a casket,
Wishing that you would complete,
My rhyme that I had felt within…
Night passed with changing sides,
Thinking about your absence meanwhile,
Realizing the void in the heart,
That was created when you depart…
A promise lived a complete day,
Without having anything to say,
precious words are now weaved …
in the form of a song that I feel…
soumyav 
somebody has to be proud after reading this one !
…and he must apologize too for keeping you waiting !!!
True! Why keep you wait? But I hope you remember this phrase
“Just because I forgot about you doesn’t mean that I’ve forgotten you”
🙂 ,I do dear ! thanks for stopping by and having a look…it reminds us of all the promises we make and only few where we return and look…
its a reminder for everyone of us… who promise for the sake and forget the rest…
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Its a Beauty in Words !
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Most Welcome !
they come together with the word “broken”…i hope we get away from the stigma of broken promises… your’s is a good start dear:)
Thanks a lot jymiely! 🙂
Awesome Soumya! Fantastic flow and rhythm…
Here is a song from Rajesh Khanna movie… enjoy this song while you wait 😉
Thats awesome! the song completely is apt for this one and i love it too… 🙂
You drove the message home…this is so neat! It’s sobering.Thanks.
welcome for appreciating!
Thanks!
nice poem, the flame of love get intense after wait.
Thanks NIrmal !
Gorgeous post, Soumya! Just saw this from the Amiguous Words group…lovely to be surrounded by poets and people who adore beauty 🙂
Thanks a lot Alarna! gr8 to be in the same group on FB
I absolutely LOVE this poem…especially
**Words for you I had kept,
In the golden chest in a casket,
Wishing that you would complete,
My rhyme that I had felt within…**
Thanks dear! the emotions always get ideal words…
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thanks for reblogging!