Forgetting the promise to be back soon,

You got busy in your errands till noon,

Waiting till the dusk  with rays of hope,

Like the designs of a kaleideoscope…

Twilight dimmed the hope of sight,

As darkness engulfed the lonely night….

Words for you I had kept,

In the golden chest in a casket,

Wishing that you would complete,

My rhyme that I had felt within…

Night passed with changing sides,

Thinking about  your absence meanwhile,

Realizing the void in the heart,

That was created when you depart…

 A promise lived a complete day,

Without having anything to say,

precious words are now weaved …

in the  form of a song that I feel…


22 thoughts on “A PROMISE

  1. Prashant June 14, 2012 / 8:56 am

    somebody has to be proud after reading this one !
    …and he must apologize too for keeping you waiting !!!

    • LilMissJoan June 14, 2012 / 10:23 am

      True! Why keep you wait? But I hope you remember this phrase
      “Just because I forgot about you doesn’t mean that I’ve forgotten you”

      • soumyav June 14, 2012 / 11:06 am

        🙂 ,I do dear ! thanks for stopping by and having a look…it reminds us of all the promises we make and only few where we return and look…

    • soumyav June 14, 2012 / 2:42 pm

      its a reminder for everyone of us… who promise for the sake and forget the rest…

  2. onlinefunland June 14, 2012 / 12:57 pm

    Reblogged this on onlinefunland and commented:
    Its a Beauty in Words !

    • soumyav June 14, 2012 / 11:59 pm

      Thanks for reblogging

      • onlinefunland June 15, 2012 / 7:04 am

        Most Welcome !

  3. jymiely June 14, 2012 / 1:29 pm

    they come together with the word “broken”…i hope we get away from the stigma of broken promises… your’s is a good start dear:)

    • soumyav June 14, 2012 / 2:14 pm

      Thanks a lot jymiely! 🙂

  4. Midnighthues June 14, 2012 / 8:07 pm

    Awesome Soumya! Fantastic flow and rhythm…

    Here is a song from Rajesh Khanna movie… enjoy this song while you wait 😉

    • soumyav June 15, 2012 / 12:00 am

      Thats awesome! the song completely is apt for this one and i love it too… 🙂

  5. The Blazing Trail June 14, 2012 / 8:54 pm

    You drove the message home…this is so neat! It’s sobering.Thanks.

  6. Nirmal Bajwa June 14, 2012 / 9:41 pm

    nice poem, the flame of love get intense after wait.

  7. Alarna Rose Gray June 15, 2012 / 12:04 pm

    Gorgeous post, Soumya! Just saw this from the Amiguous Words group…lovely to be surrounded by poets and people who adore beauty 🙂

    • soumyav June 15, 2012 / 9:16 pm

      Thanks a lot Alarna! gr8 to be in the same group on FB

  8. bipolarmuse June 17, 2012 / 8:44 pm

    I absolutely LOVE this poem…especially
    **Words for you I had kept,

    In the golden chest in a casket,

    Wishing that you would complete,

    My rhyme that I had felt within…**

    • soumyav June 17, 2012 / 9:47 pm

      Thanks dear! the emotions always get ideal words…

    • soumyav September 3, 2012 / 10:09 am

      thanks for reblogging!

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