Whenever I think of you and the time when you were here,
My eyes get wet and are filled in tears ,
I sit and gaze at the silent sky,
Which is lonely yet sparkles like a fly…
The sky today is filled up with stars,
all of them twinkling except who are too far,
Or are they the planets who just keep shining,
Changing their positions to keep the destiny altering..
Wherever you are in any corner of the world,
My world starts with your whispering word,
Life seems so incomplete without your presence,
The stars too wonder what happened to the resonance?
Loneliness surrounds when you are not around,
But the lonely starry night makes me think aloud,
These moments of solitude granted to me,
Shall seek me solace ,If I introspect within….
you have captured the essence of lonely nights….and love the last line….beautiful….:)
Thank you 🙂
lovely poem!
thanks a lot..
these words so beautiful you brought light into my day
these words give hope in a sparkingly beautiful way
they dance across the page with ryhme and beauty
beautiful words of true poetry
🙂 thanks for the sweet form of compliment..
well i think it s such a beautiful piece of poetry i couldnt think of any nicer way to reply
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Nice 🙂
thanks aroomazainab! 🙂
the “need” for someone to be around, the “desire” to be held in arms, the “wish” to be together, the “dream” to be in love forever – you described the distances which bound the sight may never bound the love in our hearts !!
Thanks a lot ! 🙂
Know very well what you meant by these lines.
It’s hard.. 😦
I know!
What I believe is being in love is accepting the fact that you are ready to go through any pain, for the love of your life but, gosh! wouldn’t there be any sunnier day?
🙂
There is…but the night is tooo long .. 😉