On the chariot of heavenly feelings,
rode the one who ruled the innumerable hearts…
embellished with elegant charm,
adorned and bedecked with enchantment.
Riding ceremoniously onto the place destined,
heralding jubilantly with the mast-head swaying,
Through the entangling forests of time,
Crossing several deserts and being on maritime…
The magnificent chariot rushes swiftly,
like a gleam of blazed lightening,
Amidst the thunderstorm which flashes giantly,
tearing apart the darkness pervading…
Like an Auriga it dazzles in the black sky,
Propagating light with utmost luminosity,
dispersing the tiniest atoms of its constituent,
scattering in the atmosphere the most enamouring scent…
The designated sanctum glows like incandescence,
reflecting glowing everywhere…
As the chariot of dreams arrives on the heart,
The charioteer of love alights …
to dwell and reign…
the kingdom of hearts…
soumyav 
Ammmazing =) as usual =)
Oh! thank you so much! welcome back dear!
Wonderful! & so atmospheric
Thank you so much!
a lovely song..the fourth stanza was my favourite..very nice
Iam happy you liked it!
Beautiful and rich colours of words, Soumya! A lovely way to start a day with them being back home again.
Thank you for wonderful presence always!
Wouldn’t have it any other way 🙂
Nice!
Thanks a lot!
It does flow like a song. I can sing these words, and naturally they settle with the tune.
It is the magic of chariot that you painted here — with rich textures, yet in ease.
I love the second and third stanza, it carries the momentum. Beautifully penned, Soumya.
Blessings and love. 🙂
Thank you so much Pawan for getting on with the flow!
Describing the Divine…
🙂 ..actually it was the chariot of love.. love which rides on the chariot as just lands out of nowhere.
you paint painting through your words, this one is gorgeous!!!!!
Thanks Sharmishtha!
You have painted such a magical and enigmatic picture…..so mataphorical….like a prince arriving to conquer a beautiful heart.
And you almost caught the real thought behind,just that its love riding the chariot ..now whether we personify or make it appear as a person its same.. love u dear!