PICTURE IT & WRITE – RELIVE !


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Days of  melancholic past

brushed aside

as I wiped the

 memory aghast

Like the written words

on a board

white or black

get erased

with the duster …

I  effaced

the old life

of my thoughts

with  tender touch

of my palm…

A new surface

appeared before

shiny,glossy

transparent more,

I tried to touch it with

my fingers

feeling the

gentleness of the nimble…

I grinned

at the refreshed  layer

a reflection

I saw very clear

Of my dreams

my aspirations alive…

I got

another chance

to live the life

the way

I like!

Written for Picture it & Write! http://wp.me/p1HrCI-111

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71 thoughts on “PICTURE IT & WRITE – RELIVE !

  1. tornadoday March 16, 2013 / 1:13 am

    Oh, this is quite lovely……..and such a perfect translation of the picture…….. Very well done, Soumyav. ~ Love, Bobbie

    • soumyav March 16, 2013 / 3:28 pm

      Thank you Bobbie! Iam really glad you went through this and liked it!

  2. terry1954 March 16, 2013 / 1:20 am

    thank you so much for the Ping BAck!!!

  3. ledrakenoir March 16, 2013 / 1:36 am

    So lovely written – sometimes we have to brush “dust” away to find the solution or the path forward…😉

    • soumyav March 16, 2013 / 3:20 pm

      Yes exactly,we need to brush the past aches,we do need to wipe the existing dust of thoughts in order to start afresh or have new perspective ! Thanks Drake

  4. carolynpageabc March 16, 2013 / 2:01 am

    Lovely…. “another chance to live the life the way I like.”
    Deeply satisfying is that thought…
    I loved your writing… 🙂

    • soumyav March 16, 2013 / 3:16 pm

      Thank you so much Carolyn for being here and liking this! Wonderful to come across you!

  5. kz March 16, 2013 / 4:00 am

    beautiful writing.. very liberating.. and yes, perfect for the image

    • soumyav March 16, 2013 / 3:06 pm

      Thank you dear! Had been a long time since I did any prompt and just jumped into this last night! good you liked dear

  6. shawnrjones12 March 16, 2013 / 7:32 am

    You deserve a book deal. I love your poetry!

    • soumyav March 16, 2013 / 2:58 pm

      🙂 Thanks Shawn! great to hear the priceless thoughts!

    • soumyav March 16, 2013 / 2:57 pm

      I love the way you compared and gave a metaphor to my poem! !🙂

  7. neelkanth March 16, 2013 / 9:32 am

    Your message
    “…to ‘live the life

    the way

    I like!”
    is much more significant.

    • soumyav March 16, 2013 / 2:56 pm

      🙂 Thanks Sir! just a verse to complement the picture! I could think of only those when I saw the prompt picture!

  8. Wendell A. Brown March 16, 2013 / 10:44 am

    Sometimes when I am reading early in the morning, I wonder what it would be like not to see and embrace your words each morning…i hate to think about it…you are always refreshing to my heart and spirit my sister. Thanks again for such a lovely poem and message! God bless!

    • soumyav March 16, 2013 / 2:54 pm

      So nice of you Wendell to give my poems a special place in your daily routine and life! Iam glad they touch you !

  9. Nirmal Bajwa March 16, 2013 / 10:49 am

    the picture and poem complement each other.

  10. Debaroon March 16, 2013 / 3:01 pm

    Much said with words too little…Yessssss, we need to erase n look ahead

    • soumyav March 16, 2013 / 3:30 pm

      Thank you Megha for being here and liking this!

    • soumyav March 16, 2013 / 7:27 pm

      Thank you Meenakshi! It was a picture prompt ,for which this was my response!

  11. poetinside March 16, 2013 / 7:47 pm

    Lovely ” another chance to live the life”. beautiful lines nicely Picturised

    • soumyav March 16, 2013 / 7:58 pm

      Thank you very much! The lines were for a picture prompt!

  12. Kamlesh Oraon March 16, 2013 / 7:55 pm

    nice framed with beautiful words….simply amazing

  13. warda Ch March 16, 2013 / 8:18 pm

    well done… ! beautiful poem ….

  14. afsarnizam March 16, 2013 / 8:38 pm

    I was dragged outs around. I was embarrassed. I have not been chuye samahimaya me. Thank you poet.

  15. Christy Birmingham March 17, 2013 / 12:53 am

    I love the hopeful way the poem ends – here’s to living a second chance worth of life!

    • soumyav March 17, 2013 / 10:30 am

      True Christy! we all live in the hope of having a blessed and peaceful life and sometimes think of reliving it!

    • soumyav March 17, 2013 / 10:29 am

      Thank you so much ! Shall be on your blog soon!🙂

    • soumyav March 17, 2013 / 10:27 am

      Thank you so much Ruby! loved the appreciation!

      • Ruby March 18, 2013 / 12:07 am

        Enjoy my dear! Have a blessed Sunday!🙂

    • soumyav March 17, 2013 / 10:27 am

      Thank you so much for the visit !

  16. Yoshiko March 17, 2013 / 9:35 pm

    Beautiful expressions. 🙂
    Thank you for liking my poem ‘Past Mistakes’. 🙂

    • soumyav March 17, 2013 / 9:36 pm

      welcome and my pleasure to be there!🙂

      • Yoshiko March 17, 2013 / 9:37 pm

        My pleasure also to read your blog 🙂

  17. Pawan Hira March 19, 2013 / 11:57 am

    Beautifully released, Soumya. In the flow, one can live.🙂

  18. fgassette March 21, 2013 / 4:15 am

    I love how your words brought to life the picture.

    Thank you for visiting my blog today. I appreciate the time you took to stop by. May your day be filled with joy and peace.
    BE ENCOURAGED! BE BLESSED!

    • soumyav March 21, 2013 / 10:16 am

      My pleasure dear for being on yours to have a peep into the wonderful world.You too have a great day

  19. Sloan March 30, 2013 / 12:45 pm

    Absolutely beautiful. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
    Love & Light, S

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