gently the breeze
kisses the flowers dangling
from the tender branch…
they shy and curl
their petals
blushing in crimson scarlet hue…
like an old melody
playing on a piano
the breeze sings the tune
the song of love.
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soumyav 
[ Smiles ] Nice poem.
I always viewed you as a gifted poet!
Thanks Renard ! Glad to have your wonderful compliment!
[ Smiles ] You are welcome, my friend.
I often observe the flowers at night and you’ve given shape to the emotions expressed. Beautiful:)
thank you Vishal
A perfect flow of beautiful words. Soothing.
Cheers 🙂
Thank you so much Sir..So happy you liked it
Takes my breath away Soumyav, your poem sings delightfully its lovesong sharing to all its vibrant energies! It is a sweet gift to embrace this morning my beloved sister…for it leaves a lasting smile to color the day. God bless you and your family!
Thanks Wendell. I think Nature always brings a smile and happiness .. And lines for it and on it are always special and touching
Aah… Your words give me a tranquil and soothing feeling. They have an eerie way of calming the soul.
Thanks Allwin. Seems you finally took out time to read almost all the new posts! :-).Hope you are doing fine
He He… 🙂 Yes I did. I am such a lazy bone. And you, the opposite. I always have to catch up with your posts.
I love this, Soumyav. I am reminded of nights when I wake to the sound of chimes outside my window……….. The breeze whispers, and I smiling wish him come in. What a beautiful piece…….. I agree with everyone else here. Your talent has grown to a new level……….of serenity and brilliance. Truly. ~ Love, Bobbie
I am delighted Bobbie that you liked the poem and could feel the breeze and its beautiful song . Iam honoured that you feel my level has grown to the level of serenity .