The singing breeze


gently the breeze

kisses the flowers dangling

from the tender branch…

they shy and curl

their petals

blushing in crimson scarlet hue…

like an old melody

playing on a piano

the breeze sings the tune

the song of love.

 

 

14 thoughts on “The singing breeze

  1. Renard Moreau February 5, 2014 / 1:09 am

    [ Smiles ] Nice poem.

    I always viewed you as a gifted poet!

    • soumyav February 5, 2014 / 1:10 am

      Thanks Renard ! Glad to have your wonderful compliment!

      • Renard Moreau February 5, 2014 / 1:12 am

        [ Smiles ] You are welcome, my friend.

  2. vishalbheeroo February 5, 2014 / 4:57 am

    I often observe the flowers at night and you’ve given shape to the emotions expressed. Beautiful:)

  3. Dilip February 5, 2014 / 7:21 pm

    A perfect flow of beautiful words. Soothing.
    Cheers🙂

    • soumyav February 5, 2014 / 10:32 pm

      Thank you so much Sir..So happy you liked it

  4. Wendell A. Brown February 6, 2014 / 9:17 pm

    Takes my breath away Soumyav, your poem sings delightfully its lovesong sharing to all its vibrant energies! It is a sweet gift to embrace this morning my beloved sister…for it leaves a lasting smile to color the day. God bless you and your family!

    • soumyav February 6, 2014 / 9:20 pm

      Thanks Wendell. I think Nature always brings a smile and happiness .. And lines for it and on it are always special and touching

  5. Allwin Bright February 7, 2014 / 3:33 pm

    Aah… Your words give me a tranquil and soothing feeling. They have an eerie way of calming the soul.

    • soumyav February 8, 2014 / 10:08 pm

      Thanks Allwin. Seems you finally took out time to read almost all the new posts!🙂.Hope you are doing fine

      • Allwin Bright February 8, 2014 / 10:32 pm

        He He…🙂 Yes I did. I am such a lazy bone. And you, the opposite. I always have to catch up with your posts.

  6. tornadoday February 7, 2014 / 10:41 pm

    I love this, Soumyav. I am reminded of nights when I wake to the sound of chimes outside my window……….. The breeze whispers, and I smiling wish him come in. What a beautiful piece…….. I agree with everyone else here. Your talent has grown to a new level……….of serenity and brilliance. Truly. ~ Love, Bobbie

    • soumyav February 10, 2014 / 9:25 pm

      I am delighted Bobbie that you liked the poem and could feel the breeze and its beautiful song . Iam honoured that you feel my level has grown to the level of serenity .

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