DEMURE


I’m in the pearls
those which adorn the earth
with their exquisite
beauty…

watching your delicate steps
on the nearby meadow
rests where my soul
in drops of dew spread …

breathing the perfume
that you once wore
fragrances which my heart
as the lilies droop more…

quietly I whisper your name
vales and hills echo the same
proclaiming of the adore
for the demure
vanished who abruptly in the far jungles…

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14 thoughts on “DEMURE

  1. VIGIL KUMAR February 6, 2014 / 9:18 am

    Wonderful portrayal about the wilderness of vanished dreams… And brilliant congregation of sentiments!

    • soumyav February 6, 2014 / 9:11 pm

      Thanks a lot Sir for your kind words

  2. vishalbheeroo February 6, 2014 / 6:48 pm

    Looking for love as one treads the path. Captivating. Hey, u changed your lay out and just realized:)

    • soumyav February 6, 2014 / 9:11 pm

      Thanks Vishal..Yes was bored with the black colour of the background, ,this looks fresh ,isn’t it?

      • vishalbheeroo February 6, 2014 / 9:17 pm

        Yeps it is. But, don’t mind a small suggestion: can u make more space for headlines coz sum times it can appear as not being aligned, falling into
        2 lines.

        • soumyav February 6, 2014 / 9:18 pm

          could nt get you? headlines as in?

  3. Wendell A. Brown February 6, 2014 / 9:13 pm

    I really love this poem Soumyav, it is just so very lovely! Have a blessed day today my sister!

    • soumyav February 6, 2014 / 9:15 pm

      Iam happy Wendell,to have you here and to know that you liked this piece. Thanks for the morning wish

  4. tornadoday February 7, 2014 / 3:23 am

    I am in the rainbow which layers the dew………. Wherever you are, I AM! I love this, Soumyav. There is a sacred intimacy to it……. Love you. ~ Bobbie

    • soumyav February 8, 2014 / 10:09 pm

      True Bobbie.The lines depict such emotion ! And good to see you liked them !

  5. Allwin Bright February 7, 2014 / 8:00 pm

    I’m running out of words to describe your poems, they’re so good!
    Makes me wish I’d learnt poetry just to be able to appreciate it better. And to know what to say🙂

    • soumyav February 8, 2014 / 10:06 pm

      🙂 Thank you Allwin ,That ‘s so nice of you to say and I feel touched hearing it!

  6. Rahul Ranjan February 8, 2014 / 10:51 am

    This poem is a piece of beauty. Specially the first stanza which was so nicely expressed. Other paragraphs were also nice but i couldn’t relate them (much higher that my level… Ha ha ha)

    • soumyav February 8, 2014 / 10:10 pm

      Thanks Rahul!🙂

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