I’m in the pearls
those which adorn the earth
with their exquisite
watching your delicate steps
on the nearby meadow
rests where my soul
in drops of dew spread …
breathing the perfume
that you once wore
fragrances which my heart
as the lilies droop more…
quietly I whisper your name
vales and hills echo the same
proclaiming of the adore
for the demure
vanished who abruptly in the far jungles…
14 thoughts on “DEMURE”
Wonderful portrayal about the wilderness of vanished dreams… And brilliant congregation of sentiments!
Thanks a lot Sir for your kind words
Looking for love as one treads the path. Captivating. Hey, u changed your lay out and just realized:)
Thanks Vishal..Yes was bored with the black colour of the background, ,this looks fresh ,isn’t it?
Yeps it is. But, don’t mind a small suggestion: can u make more space for headlines coz sum times it can appear as not being aligned, falling into
could nt get you? headlines as in?
I really love this poem Soumyav, it is just so very lovely! Have a blessed day today my sister!
Iam happy Wendell,to have you here and to know that you liked this piece. Thanks for the morning wish
I am in the rainbow which layers the dew………. Wherever you are, I AM! I love this, Soumyav. There is a sacred intimacy to it……. Love you. ~ Bobbie
True Bobbie.The lines depict such emotion ! And good to see you liked them !
I’m running out of words to describe your poems, they’re so good!
Makes me wish I’d learnt poetry just to be able to appreciate it better. And to know what to say 🙂
🙂 Thank you Allwin ,That ‘s so nice of you to say and I feel touched hearing it!
This poem is a piece of beauty. Specially the first stanza which was so nicely expressed. Other paragraphs were also nice but i couldn’t relate them (much higher that my level… Ha ha ha)
Thanks Rahul! 🙂