The last breath and the heart sighed
Alas! Will my eyes close without a glimpse of the promise made,
through turbulence and storms,I have struggled…in an urge to sip a drop
falling innumerable times,
stuck in between,
With zest I pulled over
off the dark plunging well of loss,
and continued to be strong…
yet today I lie
on the verge of death,
awaiting the last call…
any minute ,
Lips quiver, eyes sunk,
mind halts ,the beats stumble
a chilled touch
Lo! I revive
what a miracle!
a drop of nectar …
in a glance of your crepuscle.
9 thoughts on “The Last Breath”
Beautifully expressed, from sorrow to happy ending.
Thank you so much for your generous visit and kind words
Your words always bring me to some serene point. You are magical.
Thanks dear Millie for your generous thoughts
Wow! I know what that near death experience mean. The expression is so beautiful here.
Good to see you Neeraj enjoying the lines. Hope ur fine
Yes, I’m doing okay. Been working on my first novel, which is on a small vacation at the moment. After the vacation, the second draft will be worked upon. Thank you for asking. I hope you’re having a delightful time there.
Powerful words like drop of nectar.
Thank you Vishal. Iam humbled