Let her sleep!


LET HER SLEEP
Amidst the weeds and few roses,
lies silently,
the girl in white…
in deep sleep

Shh! Dnt talk here
she will wake up…
After long , the dreams
are here
so do not tread…
she is tired and fatique…

sings the lullaby
melodious wind
caressing the sleeping queen!

Sheds few drops , the clouds as tears
quenching her thirst since years
Let her rest …
Let her be in peace
Beside the coffin ,
The nightingale weeps!

 

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12 thoughts on “Let her sleep!

  1. neelkanth June 28, 2014 / 2:56 pm

    Highly heart rending and full of solemn melancholy.

    • soumyav June 28, 2014 / 3:09 pm

      Much obliged Sir by your wonderful token of appreciation

  2. vishalbheeroo June 28, 2014 / 3:00 pm

    How can one be not moved when such precious words stroke our hearts, Soumya:)

    • soumyav June 28, 2014 / 3:10 pm

      Thanks Vishal. True the depiction too touched me,as I wrote and concluded.

  3. Indira June 28, 2014 / 4:30 pm

    I agree with Neelkanth.

    • soumyav June 29, 2014 / 12:09 am

      My honour Indiraji. Thanks for your thought.

  4. todessakane2013 June 28, 2014 / 4:55 pm

    Absolutely lovely. Such a depth of beauty in the writing that really painted a picture in my mind as I was reading. Lovely thank you🙂

    • soumyav June 29, 2014 / 12:10 am

      Thank you Tracey, Iam delighted that you loved the words and imagery.

      • todessakane2013 June 29, 2014 / 6:21 pm

        Thank you my friend I enjoy your wonderful work very much🙂

  5. Soumyaa Verma June 29, 2014 / 9:21 pm

    Soumya, this was very beautiful, heart melting poem and a beautiful yet sorrowful imagery. I loved the way you’ve composed it🙂

    • soumyav June 29, 2014 / 11:54 pm

      Thank you so much for your lovely comment and being here. Iam glad you enjoyed the piece.

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