Thou! Jealousy!

Thou! Jealousy
as a veiled maiden deceits…

metamorphoses into various shapes
changeth appearances
with exuberant names…

lest anyone finds
the hidden coquette
she overthrows him into the tragic well…

Discontented, ever desiring
innocence burns out in her lusty eyes
she hath destroyed the realms
of peace and love
playing the fiddle to her  tunes!

Beware! says the soul
here  comes, the enticing queen
do not be her slave
dooms she ,every life…thence,
open your eyes
remove the veil…







13 thoughts on “Thou! Jealousy!

  1. neelkanth June 19, 2014 / 10:08 am

    ‘Veiled maiden’ picturised nicely. Symbolically the whole theme manifests in a complete most order.

    • soumyav June 19, 2014 / 12:15 pm

      Thank you so much Sir!

  2. Rekha June 19, 2014 / 10:22 am

    Lovely! Especially these lines.

    “Beware! says the soul
    here comes, the enticing queen
    do not be her slave
    dooms she ,every life…thence,
    open your eyes
    remove the veil…”

    • soumyav June 19, 2014 / 12:16 pm

      So glad to see you here Rekha and to know you liked the lines

  3. vishalbheeroo June 19, 2014 / 10:34 am

    Open your eyes, remove the veil..these are beautiful lines and am in love withe each and every word..magical and pure heavenly bliss:)

    • soumyav June 19, 2014 / 12:17 pm

      Thanks Vishal. Isn’t it the truth that we prefer to see through the veil and forget to see the reality. Good to know that you loved the piece

    • soumyav June 19, 2014 / 12:18 pm

      Iam humbled by your visit and words

  4. purpleraysblog June 19, 2014 / 11:34 am

    Beautiful words but sadly humanity is already enslaved by the “enticing queen”! Great post!

    • soumyav June 19, 2014 / 12:19 pm

      Yes,sadly its in the grip of thus. But we always need to make an effort to loosen this clutch. Thank you so much for your thoughts

    • soumyav June 20, 2014 / 8:03 pm

      My honour Amit. Iam overwhelmed that you liked this

      • Amit Rahman June 21, 2014 / 11:29 pm

        you are most welcome my fellow poet!

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