tis your journey,
which you undertake
on the lonesome path
for miles before you rest…
afar lies the horizon,
prickly branches near
the sun will scorch your tender skin’
if you aren’t strong and
stand with valour…
lift thy spirits in dark nights
through dense jungles
scary beings of fear and death
shall haunt you
if you don’t have faith ever.
tis your journey,
O! young soul…
traverse on the path
till you touch the blue sky
and finally kiss the stars….
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soumyav 
afar lies the horizon,
prickly branches near
the sun will scorch your tender skin’
if you aren’t strong and
stand with valour…
simply brilliant
Thank you very much Amit
Scorched, scoured? Keep on walking. Keep on truckin’.
True ,our journey needs to go on continuously inspite of endless hurdles. Thanks for being here
Certainly a meaningful insight to heading to an ecstatic point at its pinnacle.
My honour Sir, for the appreciation
Tis so beautiful and positive Soumya. Now I know where to get back my mojo..
Thank you Vishal
Your poem reminds me of those literary works that we read in our literary books in english periods- school days. This one is a brilliant work! You recreated magic.
Thts really sweet of you! Iam humbly touched and happy that you liked ths