Melancholic drops!

shared I , the melancholic drops

fell which on the blossom of life

drenching my fabric

whence I treasure a casket

of those translucent gems for you.


not before long

they had rolled swiftly

away was the spring of love then,

missed thy ,my gorgeous raindrops

doused which as the early monsoon.


I realize ,how precious you

find them, glittering and shining

preserved , saved thus

like jewels

the drops melancholic…


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12 thoughts on “Melancholic drops!

  1. vishalbheeroo June 9, 2014 / 3:27 pm

    Melancholic monsoon drops wades through the spirit,
    as I dance like an innocent child as if no one is watching.
    Truly a Jewel beautifully echoed by Soumya,
    she makes the images so vivid and run wild in thy imagination.

    • soumyav June 9, 2014 / 11:29 pm

      Thank you Vishal for the additional lines. Iam touched that the poem resounds the drops and creates an imagery

      • vishalbheeroo June 10, 2014 / 7:50 pm

        It’s always divine and a suroor to read you:)

  2. neelkanth June 9, 2014 / 3:59 pm

    Your well written lines remind me of Keat’s “Ode to melancholy” where he wrote ‘To sorrow I bade good morrow but cheerly cheerly she loves me dearly’. I also endorse what Vishalbheeroo has spoken about your poem.

    • soumyav June 9, 2014 / 11:30 pm

      My true honour Sir, that these simple lines remind you of Keats. To be there beside his name in any way is truly a pleasure.

  3. Dilip June 9, 2014 / 7:56 pm

    Beautiful words dripping with melancholia!

    • soumyav June 9, 2014 / 11:32 pm

      Thanks a lot Dilp Sir for visiting and that you enjoyed .

  4. Soumyaa Verma June 9, 2014 / 11:56 pm

    A lovely poem! It brought some joy to me while I read 🙂

    • soumyav June 10, 2014 / 12:21 am

      Thanks a lot Soumyaa! Glad to see a person here with the same name.. ! 🙂

  5. Uzoma June 10, 2014 / 10:02 am

    This reeks with melancholia, Soumya, Powerful and beautiful as always.

    • soumyav June 10, 2014 / 11:17 pm

      Thank you Uzoma for your wonderful comment. Its great to have you here after long

      • Uzoma June 12, 2014 / 1:34 pm

        Always a pleasure reading your works.

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