shared I , the melancholic drops

fell which on the blossom of life

drenching my fabric

whence I treasure a casket

of those translucent gems for you.


not before long

they had rolled swiftly

away was the spring of love then,

missed thy ,my gorgeous raindrops

doused which as the early monsoon.


I realize ,how precious you

find them, glittering and shining

preserved , saved thus

like jewels

the drops melancholic…


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12 thoughts on “Melancholic drops!

  1. Melancholic monsoon drops wades through the spirit,
    as I dance like an innocent child as if no one is watching.
    Truly a Jewel beautifully echoed by Soumya,
    she makes the images so vivid and run wild in thy imagination.

  2. Your well written lines remind me of Keat’s “Ode to melancholy” where he wrote ‘To sorrow I bade good morrow but cheerly cheerly she loves me dearly’. I also endorse what Vishalbheeroo has spoken about your poem.

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