MUTE LOVE


MUTE LOVE

Perished the leaf
The fresh fluorescent green
That which crowned the royal twig …
Why did it die,
What happened ,asked the passer-by?

Lamented the tree
The orchid flower was her love
She adored the flower throughout her life
yesterday it accidentally got crushed
When a traveler plucked it
and crumpled …

The moment it saw the petals shriveling
The pain of the flower trembling
the little leaf couldn’t withstand
thereby died the next instant.

It was a mute love between the two
tied by bond of unusual love of dew
The drops those covered the orchid petals
slid down to the leaf
through the sepals.

As gift of love
it drank every bead
caressed the drops kissing her feet
breathing the perfume of her love,
The leaf respired every minute…

When the scent got buried in the soil of life
The green leaf too died …

11 thoughts on “MUTE LOVE

  1. neelkanth May 19, 2014 / 11:11 am

    Manifestation of a decayed smell of puberty and a mute but powerful love is superb and I relished every bit of it.

    • soumyav May 19, 2014 / 12:05 pm

      Thank you Sir for the interest in the mute language of nature .

  2. vishalbheeroo May 19, 2014 / 12:56 pm

    The love that only the heart can express as the flower dies can only be felt by a sensitive heart and powerfully portrayed, Soumya:)

    • soumyav May 19, 2014 / 2:12 pm

      O! Thts a wonderful compliment Vishal! Thanks

  3. shawnrjones12 May 20, 2014 / 3:12 pm

    I loved this so much, I read it twice to myself then shared it with my husband.

    • soumyav May 20, 2014 / 10:26 pm

      Thanks a lot Shawn , Iam so glad you enjoyed the lines !

  4. Allwin Bright May 21, 2014 / 6:20 pm

    Personification at its best. Thoroughly enjoyed it.🙂

    • soumyav May 21, 2014 / 10:26 pm

      Thank you very much Allwin

  5. Pragati May 24, 2014 / 3:01 pm

    “it was a mute love”- Beautiful lines Soumya.

  6. Lili June 4, 2014 / 3:37 pm

    this was so beautiful. Its true love

    • soumyav June 4, 2014 / 11:09 pm

      Thanks a lot for your visit and for liking this

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