beneath the surface
when can you see
the soft bosom of delicate care
life with challenges moves on…
yet you are blind to
my revealed …inner self …
how long, how far
shall I strive to carry on
when you still can’t see
my unselfish being!
13 thoughts on “How far ,how long!”
I long for you care and comfort,
yet you eludes far away from me.
I braved the storms, climbed the hills to seek your companionship.
Yet, we are strangers in the storms.
We are two separate entities yet united by destiny.
You are my mirror image, the extended me in character, thoughts and deeds.
Soumya, I added a lil’ something. But, love ur inspiring words who prompted me to scribble something. Perfect ode to life and that shall never exist and gather dust, someday.
VERY WELL SAID, APTLY AND WITH A SWEET PINCH.
Thank you Vishal for the extra lines. Glad the poem inspired you to write more. Your verse too resonates well.
Thanks. You’ve been an inspiration, Soumya:)
My pleasure !
Not sure what to take of this.. but life is such I believe. . Sometimes yiu can do what you want with all ur heart and it’s not happy and sometimes a little something you do its happy..
Thanks a lot BM. Its what we learn , The effort should continue and we should learn to accept and live.
well we got ot accept no other way .. is there 🙂
Wish your ‘unselfish being’ to elicit the requisite response some day, Soumya.
Thanks for your response Sir. Its all in our thought and mind, what we believe and try for.
Reminds me of special friendships I’ve lost over the years. I always thought that such special friendships would last a lifetime. But I was wrong. 😦 If only it was so easy to let go off and move on.
its a falsity. nothing lasts forever,if anything has to ,it is our conscience n the creator.