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O ! thundering clouds!
shower ! rain thy selfless love today!
in pain dances the alluring peacock…
amidst the jungle ,camouflaged
restless is its heart and the storming weather!
gazing at the grey clouds above
it awaits thy ecstatic drizzle
tired feet ,ache
as endless,becomes the terpsichore…
The salve to the dreary feet
whilst it moves to the lilting tunes
is in your drops ,O ! sailing clouds!
Rain !
The peacock awaits today for your shower!
So pretty!
Thank you so much Christy! 🙂
So cute.
Thanks a lot
oh moving clouds,
pour your mercy,
be it the drops of your joy,
or tears of sorrow…
A humble heart prays to you,
as it prays for all here.
your shower blesses the world,
And brings smile to your admirer here..
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reminds me of rains in the villages in which we played ‘once’.
Thank you Shri for sharing the precious thoughts in form of a wonderful verse. I can imagine how it feels being in the rain in a village.
Well done!
Thanks a lot
Lovely and lively too with an enchanting flavour. I feel like reblogging it, I think I may do it on 14/2/14. Inspired by yours, I repeat a few lines from my poem on ‘Clouds’. May be you like it.
When it is raining cats and dogs
And there is chorus of the frogs
I feel like looking at Thee
And keep so on till Eternity.
Thanks a lot for sharing the beautiful lines from your verse Sir. Iam really happy that you liked the resonance of the poem and connected with the imagery.