PETALS


 
Unfurled petals as they seem,
The curved lashes black and shining,
Who prevent the deluge
to the brim…
 
cupping up the falling drops of destiny…
with every cascade of the fall,
breaks the delusion and fallacy
to let the sublime stream flow
without inhibition…
 
thy petals ! herald
the advent of spring,
the fall and rains  behind lay stranded,
they embrace the fragrance
of the bouquet
brought with winds of the mist!
 
 
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13 thoughts on “PETALS

  1. vishalbheeroo January 27, 2014 / 2:08 am

    I can feel the gush of freshness and energy in the atmosphere. Powerful vibe:)

    • soumyav January 28, 2014 / 10:37 pm

      Thank you Vishal

  2. neelkanth January 27, 2014 / 10:12 am

    Feeling like getting embalmed with a soothing caress of the ‘unfurled petals’.

    • soumyav January 28, 2014 / 10:37 pm

      Thanks Sir for your thoughts

  3. Mira Jay January 27, 2014 / 5:42 pm

    Can’t even find the right expression to tell what the following line has done to my cords: “The falling drops of destiny”…

    Peace & Light

    • soumyav January 28, 2014 / 10:36 pm

      HI MIra! Glad to see you after long. Iam glad the lines were liked by you. . Hope you are doing fine

  4. Dilip January 27, 2014 / 7:11 pm

    Soumyav truly exhilarating!

    • soumyav January 28, 2014 / 10:34 pm

      Thank you so much sir!

    • soumyav February 1, 2014 / 11:13 pm

      Thanks Dakshi for being here and liking

      • Dakshi February 2, 2014 / 5:09 am

        Always welcome…

  5. Eric Alagan January 31, 2014 / 6:29 am

    “cupping up the falling drops of destiny”

    Love this phrase.

    Peace,
    Eric

    • soumyav February 1, 2014 / 11:14 pm

      Thank you very much Eric. Been a long time since you are here. Glad you liked the phrase. Hope you are doing well

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