burnt pyre of the hopes in flame

had remained ablaze

yet remained in haze

ashes now heap on earth

barren realm stands without shade…

had been once  fertile

rained then the feelings

deserted now is the land

devoid of living…

for years when it stands such,

a cacti won’t grow on its soil thus.


4 thoughts on “BARREN

  1. neelkanth December 13, 2013 / 5:23 pm

    NICE. I HAVE ALREADY RATED IT AS EXCELLENT. You might have received my earlier Page and possibly gone through it. As a semblance sort of thing to your poem, I am giving below the link for your ready perusal.


  2. Wendell A. Brown December 13, 2013 / 6:24 pm

    Very descriptive, sounds like a barren wasteland, your poems always trigger images and thoughts quickly Soumyav. May you have a blessed and wonderful weekend my sister!

    • soumyav December 14, 2013 / 11:34 am

      Iam honoured Wendell that my words give you the imagery. Thanks for the kind words and blessings

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