THE EYES !


With the charming love of your tender heart,
I fall in pieces like shreds apart,
See! What  your gaze hath done to me,
I die here in ecstasy..
 ***
Those deep eyes,pierced through
The arrow struck me into two,
How doth I now remove the hit,
The pain drills inside still…
***
Yet I love this longing ache,
The beats when dance and  pulsate
On the rhythm of your blink
Mesmerizing more as I sink…
***
Could anyone hear the unique sound
The music of the flickering gape,
 Twinkles when, the iris like a gleam,
In cadence passionately,as a dream.

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13 thoughts on “THE EYES !

  1. Rahul Ranjan December 8, 2013 / 3:11 pm

    AN ART IN THE FIELD OF POETRY. YOUR WORDS WERE LIKE THEY HAVE BEEN PICKED FROM THE SEE. SO DEEP AND MEANINGFUL.

    • soumyav December 8, 2013 / 10:47 pm

      thanks Rahul for liking n being here

  2. Thamyris December 8, 2013 / 5:32 pm

    Magnificently projected in every line! A glorious rapture in every verse. Ah, to die in ecstasy. Beautiful.

    • soumyav December 8, 2013 / 9:44 pm

      Thank you Tam.Nice to see you felt the intensity of the words and thoughts

    • soumyav December 12, 2013 / 7:18 pm

      🙂 Thanks Shawn!

  3. Gede Prama December 9, 2013 / 5:22 pm

    Amazing and Thank you for writing which is quite good and best wishes always, and greetings. Kindness blossoms in your heart

    • soumyav December 9, 2013 / 7:26 pm

      Thank you very much for your blessings .

    • soumyav December 9, 2013 / 7:24 pm

      Thanks a lot for going through this.

    • soumyav December 10, 2013 / 1:58 pm

      Oh! thanks Shalini for dropping by here too!🙂

  4. Prashant December 27, 2013 / 6:16 pm

    does beauty ever feel deja vu ?
    I wonder…

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