ARTIFACT !


 

 

In the burning ashes that lie scattered

are embers of the soulful desires

glow they for a second

when a breeze kisses them ,even if they are on pyre!

 

Amidst the grey powdered dust

stand  as heat of passion

raindrops extinguish their flame

but the intensity evokes the fire…

 

Watch the rolling stones

The gorgeous rubies round

in the grey sapphires

creating an exquisite artifact

that shall withstand weather of every ages!

 

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22 thoughts on “ARTIFACT !

  1. Maxima November 6, 2013 / 11:01 am

    Beautiful post my freind!Have nice day

    • soumyav November 6, 2013 / 11:02 am

      Thank you Stefan! Humbled to have your words here for my poem!

  2. neelkanth November 6, 2013 / 11:11 am

    THE POEM HAS BEAUTY OF A DAZZLING DIAMOND. SO NICE.

    • soumyav November 6, 2013 / 11:12 am

      Iam obliged and touched by your appreciation Sir.

  3. Rahul Ranjan November 6, 2013 / 12:50 pm

    Powerful and never-give-up kind of ashes. Raindrops extinguishing them and they again glow up.
    Its encouraging.. Ending with strength of Ruby and Sapphire was very supportive !

    • soumyav November 8, 2013 / 7:43 pm

      Thank you Rahul for your wonderful feedback and sharing your view about the poem.

      • Rahul Ranjan November 9, 2013 / 6:37 pm

        Hi soumya. I’m missing your thoughts in my blog. Seems you are too busy writing your new novel ??
        I’ve tried out writing a few poems these days. I’ll be pleased if you give your thoughts on them.

        • soumyav November 11, 2013 / 12:36 am

          Sorry Rahul,havent been able to go on anybody’s blog since last many days.Shall be there soon.

  4. lvsrao November 7, 2013 / 5:38 pm

    Beautiful poem.

    • soumyav November 7, 2013 / 11:33 pm

      Thank you so much

    • soumyav November 11, 2013 / 12:39 am

      🙂 Nice to know you liked it

    • soumyav November 12, 2013 / 3:26 pm

      Many thanks Tazein for your kindness and the award. I will be there soon to accept it.

  5. shivprasad November 12, 2013 / 1:19 pm

    wow… so nicely driven….!!

  6. White Pearl November 12, 2013 / 7:48 pm

    How beautiful…… I love it. I am a fan of Indian Poetry now🙂

    • soumyav November 14, 2013 / 10:38 am

      Thank you dear Wendell. I am touched by your thoughts.

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