In the burning ashes that lie scattered
are embers of the soulful desires
glow they for a second
when a breeze kisses them ,even if they are on pyre!
Amidst the grey powdered dust
stand as heat of passion
raindrops extinguish their flame
but the intensity evokes the fire…
Watch the rolling stones
The gorgeous rubies round
in the grey sapphires
creating an exquisite artifact
that shall withstand weather of every ages!
22 thoughts on “ARTIFACT !”
Beautiful post my freind!Have nice day
Thank you Stefan! Humbled to have your words here for my poem!
THE POEM HAS BEAUTY OF A DAZZLING DIAMOND. SO NICE.
Iam obliged and touched by your appreciation Sir.
Powerful and never-give-up kind of ashes. Raindrops extinguishing them and they again glow up.
Its encouraging.. Ending with strength of Ruby and Sapphire was very supportive !
Thank you Rahul for your wonderful feedback and sharing your view about the poem.
Hi soumya. I’m missing your thoughts in my blog. Seems you are too busy writing your new novel ??
I’ve tried out writing a few poems these days. I’ll be pleased if you give your thoughts on them.
Sorry Rahul,havent been able to go on anybody’s blog since last many days.Shall be there soon.
Thank you so much
I chose you dear friend, please pay it forward with love and kindness, in line with who you are. http://theothersideofugly.com/2013/11/09/another-year-of-honor-as-a-blogger/
Thank you Sheri for the love and kindness.
🙂 Nice to know you liked it
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Many thanks Tazein for your kindness and the award. I will be there soon to accept it.
wow… so nicely driven….!!
Thank you Shiv!
How beautiful…… I love it. I am a fan of Indian Poetry now 🙂
your words are always a sweet blessing to embrace!
Thank you dear Wendell. I am touched by your thoughts.