Wild !


The wild runs into the forest

randomly through the dense woods

stamping the tiny creatures

which dare to cross its way through!

thrashing ,destroying the delicate branches

snorting way out from the hazed blues

lost amidst the broken trees

it stands almost confused!

rage and anger spoils 

the sense of its direction 

process of thoughts get wrecked

by his ire and frustration…

mocks his helplessness now standing afar

“with peace and mental repose

he could have achieved the ataraxis

self destruction he did

by choosing wrath over equilibrium!!!”

10 thoughts on “Wild !

  1. vishalbheeroo October 22, 2013 / 4:05 pm

    Too beautiful. I love the adventure angle you brought into this amazing poem, Soumya:)

    • soumyav October 23, 2013 / 11:25 am

      Thank you Vishal,happy that you enjoyed the poem.

  2. neelkanth October 22, 2013 / 5:04 pm

    Most relevant a mention of ‘wrath over equilibrium!!!”‘ is inspiring by all means. I take it as an excellent one and accordingly I have already rated it. So nice a composition.

    • soumyav October 23, 2013 / 11:41 am

      Iam so glad Sir that you could discover the message behind the lines and liked it.

  3. lvsrao October 22, 2013 / 5:55 pm

    Excellent. Inspiring too. Well composed.

    • soumyav October 23, 2013 / 11:44 am

      thanks a lot that you liked and found it inspiring too.

  4. Rahul Ranjan October 22, 2013 / 6:49 pm

    How anger and rush can spoil the things around and create trouble to helpless creatures around. Very nice poem and nicely written!

    • soumyav October 23, 2013 / 11:52 am

      so nicely put in words about my thoughts and poem Rahul…thanks a lot

  5. Rafiullah Mian October 23, 2013 / 10:17 am

    You have likened wrath with the forest in a good manner.
    Making human attitudes as the subject of poetry is a contemporary need of the usage of our capabilities.
    As talking about your poetry, always, we found a good simile or metaphorical expression.

    • soumyav October 23, 2013 / 2:37 pm

      Thank you Rafi for your kind words about my poem. Iam touched that you could feel the connection of the human attitudes and liked the metaphorical expression. Indeed it is need of hour to express the shortcomings of human and humanity through words which can reach people and at least have some effect or allow everyone to think for a second.

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