Written for Ermilia’s “Picture it and Write”. http://wp.me/p1HrCI-1jm
slippery the dark alley,
wet with gruesome doubts,
the smooth floor of love lies today
in the dull passage of incertitude…
On the end stood the soul,
watching the melee of thoughts
awaiting to be swept by
a turbulent storm!
Truth has different facades
each has a different tale,
need of the hour
proclaims to wipe out the fears across the lane…
then would the darkened walls
be illuminated
song of pure clear love
shall flow through then
the gloomy ramparts!
Very deep thought and its inspiring. I analyzed it as follow:
that you need to go through a dark passage. The ultimate aim of yours is to meet the soul. But the passage is dark, its full of confusion; here your love is not with u, when u needed him. Your mind is full of doubts, fear.
The soul at the other end is waiting for you to wash off your mind, blow all the bad thoughts which came, clear all your doubt. Wants you to BELIEVE on yourself. And get through the passage to meet the soul.
So that when you are done all your confusion will be gone, all your worries will be gone… That is the last lines: illuminating the walls…
Really beautiful presentation.
Beautifully deciphered Rahul! After a long time you are here and its really good to see you analyzing the lines so perfectly. Hope you are doing well and everything else is fine.
Truth has different facades, beautifully and potently said, Soumya:)
Thanks a lot Vishal!🙂
Love gives the wealth of believe (a truth which illuminates hearts). And the uncertainty Gives birth to the fear.
A best poetic expression of your rich thoughts.
Very well said Rafi, You added a beautiful expression to my thought!