Shreds the veins of the heart
dripping scarlet blood
the piercing words
thy uttered
killing the soft bosom…
nurture I the flower of dreams,
crush you with your
crumbled speech
shies away the bud thence,
away from the world so mean…
Hitherto to be plucked by the withering time
the moment to perish hasn’t arrived
seasons change in despair
cries the soul in love,profound.
Hail ! thy wind
Halt! thy clouds
listen to the wounded core’s shout,
can you absorb the pain and
sing before the Lord!
what should the soul pray for
Peace,Tranquil,or Joy,
Happiness to cherish
or Love from her thou!!!
Beautiful x
Thank you dear ! 🙂
Very resonating words, Soumya. You express the music of the heart in a subtle, compassionate, and instructive way using the budding flower as a metaphoric front. Beautiful pic, btw.
Many thanks Uzo, Ya ! The song of the heart when sung in a low resonating way touches every heart… The pic was taken during visit to India.
Joy, I mean ecstasy, springs up only from the peace with tranquility. You have described it with a serene touch, Soumya.
Iam obliged Sir,that you say that very correctly and in a very subtle manner. Thanks and glad you liked the poem.
A very nice read. >KB
many thanks for your precious words. They mean a lot !
You are more than welcome.>KB
Enchanting trip!
Thank you Udo.NIce to see you here enjoying this
Very well written… 🙂
Thank you Ledrake.
The soul is caught between the devil and the deep blue sea;
It shall stir itself to greatness after braving the storm;
Faced with bruises and scars, the soul shall relish victory.
You made it so flawless, Soumya:)
Thanks a lot Vishal and you really made the gist very beautiful. Glad you liked the lines and enjoyed the poem…
First 5 lines capture it all – well presented
Thanks a lot Eric
Always special to embrace a poem of yours as the new day begins! Blessings my sister!
Many thanks Wendell for your wonderful blessings..
What a powerful poem! Well done!
Thank you Christy for loving this !
You sing a song surely every heart can understand, Soumyav. ~ Ever love, Bobbie
So lovely to see you hear and hum the song too Bobbie! 🙂