A Song of heart!

Shreds the veins of the heart

dripping scarlet blood

the piercing words

thy uttered

killing the soft bosom…


nurture I the flower of dreams,

crush you with your

crumbled speech

shies away the bud thence,

away from the world so mean…


Hitherto to be plucked by the withering time

the moment to perish hasn’t arrived

seasons change in despair

cries the soul in love,profound.


Hail ! thy wind

Halt! thy clouds

listen to the wounded core’s shout,

can you absorb the pain and

sing before the Lord!

what should the soul pray for

Peace,Tranquil,or Joy,

Happiness to cherish

or Love from her thou!!!




24 thoughts on “A Song of heart!

    • soumyav September 15, 2013 / 8:09 pm

      Thank you dear ! 🙂

  1. Uzoma September 15, 2013 / 2:52 pm

    Very resonating words, Soumya. You express the music of the heart in a subtle, compassionate, and instructive way using the budding flower as a metaphoric front. Beautiful pic, btw.

    • soumyav September 15, 2013 / 8:10 pm

      Many thanks Uzo, Ya ! The song of the heart when sung in a low resonating way touches every heart… The pic was taken during visit to India.

  2. neelkanth September 15, 2013 / 2:58 pm

    Joy, I mean ecstasy, springs up only from the peace with tranquility. You have described it with a serene touch, Soumya.

    • soumyav September 15, 2013 / 8:11 pm

      Iam obliged Sir,that you say that very correctly and in a very subtle manner. Thanks and glad you liked the poem.

    • soumyav September 15, 2013 / 8:13 pm

      many thanks for your precious words. They mean a lot !

    • soumyav September 15, 2013 / 8:12 pm

      Thank you Udo.NIce to see you here enjoying this

    • soumyav September 15, 2013 / 8:13 pm

      Thank you Ledrake.

  3. vishalbheeroo September 16, 2013 / 2:06 am

    The soul is caught between the devil and the deep blue sea;
    It shall stir itself to greatness after braving the storm;
    Faced with bruises and scars, the soul shall relish victory.
    You made it so flawless, Soumya:)

    • soumyav September 16, 2013 / 10:34 am

      Thanks a lot Vishal and you really made the gist very beautiful. Glad you liked the lines and enjoyed the poem…

  4. Eric Alagan September 16, 2013 / 3:47 pm

    First 5 lines capture it all – well presented

    • soumyav September 17, 2013 / 10:56 am

      Thanks a lot Eric

  5. Wendell A. Brown September 16, 2013 / 8:48 pm

    Always special to embrace a poem of yours as the new day begins! Blessings my sister!

    • soumyav September 17, 2013 / 10:55 am

      Many thanks Wendell for your wonderful blessings..

    • soumyav September 17, 2013 / 10:55 am

      Thank you Christy for loving this !

  6. tornadoday September 18, 2013 / 12:05 am

    You sing a song surely every heart can understand, Soumyav. ~ Ever love, Bobbie

    • soumyav September 18, 2013 / 11:02 am

      So lovely to see you hear and hum the song too Bobbie! 🙂

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