TOGETHERNESS !


Why do I stand beneath the starlit sky
witnessing the grand meteor show
why do I dip my gentle hand
into the freezing stream that flows?

What do I think,when the orchids bloom
Why do I gaze at the autumn fall
what doth run in my mind
when the night breaks into the golden dawn?

What is it that I search for
on the endless path where I walk?
Why do I lie on the grass,
staring above the azure, enrapt?

the mind moves in the quest of its recluse,
the heart explores the world
     craving for the tranquil air,
thoughts seek the poise serene 
     amongst the rustling crowd
wherein my soul yearns for the happiness in despair ...
...And I ,as a whole ,disintegrate ...
awaiting for the ultimate togetherness.

Batu-20120819-00720

23 thoughts on “TOGETHERNESS !

  1. lifethroughmyeyes September 8, 2013 / 3:07 pm

    Amazing and beautiful..
    One of my favorites so far๐Ÿ™‚
    Keep writing๐Ÿ™‚

    • soumyav September 9, 2013 / 10:46 am

      Thank you Swati ! Glad to see this to be your fav!๐Ÿ™‚

  2. Neelkanth Neek September 8, 2013 / 4:17 pm

    The poem ends with a suspense hankeringly waiting for the ‘ultimate togetherness’. So nice and lovely, Soumya. I have marked it for facebook.

    • soumyav September 9, 2013 / 10:47 am

      Iam thankful Sir as you discovered the beauty in the suspense and found it worth sharing!

  3. Manu Kurup September 8, 2013 / 7:45 pm

    Beautiful words. Amazing selection of photgraph too.
    Experiencing an increased divinity in your writing these days.๐Ÿ™‚

    • soumyav September 9, 2013 / 10:49 am

      Manu, the photograph was taken by my husband while on his trip to Malaysia,it has an intriguing effect . Iam humbly touched to know you that you got the feel of divinity in my words. May be the short break brought out more insights.๐Ÿ™‚

  4. vishalbheeroo September 8, 2013 / 8:25 pm

    The spirit for togetherness aptly described, Soumya:)

    • soumyav September 9, 2013 / 10:49 am

      Many thanks Vishal !

  5. ledrakenoir September 9, 2013 / 11:50 am

    Beautiful and inpiring written – and it work perfect together with the great photo..๐Ÿ™‚

    • soumyav September 9, 2013 / 2:05 pm

      Iam so glad to hear that , from you Drake. Happy to know you liked the lines.

  6. Rekha September 9, 2013 / 1:17 pm

    “And I ,as a whole ,disintegrate …
    awaiting for the ultimate togetherness.”

    Really beautiful Soumya…

    • soumyav September 9, 2013 / 2:05 pm

      much thanks Rekha!

  7. tornadoday September 9, 2013 / 5:38 pm

    Such a loving witness to the miracle of life…………… Beautiful, my friend. ~ Love, Bobbie

    • soumyav September 10, 2013 / 2:49 pm

      your words resonate with beauty of nature Bobbie and its really touching when you like the lines.

    • soumyav September 10, 2013 / 2:49 pm

      your words resonate with beauty of nature Bobbie and its really touching when you like the lines.

  8. drsuraiyanasim September 10, 2013 / 2:56 pm

    Amzing beauty in your words saumi…..i was enraptured!

    • soumyav September 10, 2013 / 11:30 pm

      Thank you for the raid on my blog today! :-):-)..you must have gt tired of reading ….๐Ÿ˜€

      • drsuraiyanasim September 11, 2013 / 10:21 am

        Are you kidding? Tired of reading your poems???
        NEVER!!!!๐Ÿ™‚

        • soumyav September 11, 2013 / 10:45 am

          ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

  9. lvsrao September 10, 2013 / 5:48 pm

    Beautiful expression.

  10. nightlake September 11, 2013 / 4:18 am

    This was like a song. Beautiful

    • soumyav September 11, 2013 / 10:40 am

      So nice to see you liked the rhythm.

share your suggestions,comments and thoughts on this ...

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s