Swipe away the negations those which cloud the vision
blurring the image of the clarity
weakens the mind and shivers with fear
for a preconceived notion.
Beneath the mulberry leaves
rests a tiny butterfly
ready to fly for its survival
lone it needs strength in the wings,
which only your faith can reason.
In the buries of the earth
lies a seed tiny in stature,
on the verge of sprouting
to germinate  out in the air.
Molten wax drips along
the sides of a flickering candle,
awaiting for hands to protect it
from the storm of periods and seasons.
All in the mind we have in store,
the thoughts as a hidden treasure,
mightier than the visible actions,
Our powerful thoughts  in quantum measures.

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35 thoughts on “MIGHTY THOUGHTS!

    • soumyav June 27, 2013 / 10:50 am

      Yes Sharmishtha ,they can create or destroy a world.

      • sharmishtha basu June 29, 2013 / 10:42 am

        precisely! this is why I these days keep a watch on them and try to make them positive!

  1. rajbgm June 27, 2013 / 10:36 am

    Nice one, thanks for Sharing

  2. neelkanth June 27, 2013 / 10:55 am


  3. EBotziou June 27, 2013 / 10:58 am

    At this time in the morning my thoughts are definitely not mighty! Great poem! 🙂

    • soumyav June 27, 2013 / 11:02 am

      🙂 They are yet creative as always dear!

  4. Dewang June 27, 2013 / 1:02 pm

    “Swipe away the negations those which cloud the vision
    blurring the image of the clarity”
    This line of yours were the answer i was searching from many days…
    It happens frequently whenever i am searching answers i get it some or the other Way.
    Thanks for the wonderful lines

    • soumyav June 27, 2013 / 2:31 pm

      So good to see you connecting with the lines Dewang. Yes ,whenever we are searching for an answer or getting confused,there is always a hint or sign which leads us to our solution. Only thing that is needed then is a silent mind,Iam glad you found it here in these lines.

  5. Rekha June 27, 2013 / 1:26 pm

    Lovely…thoughts indeed are very powerful…negative or positive…they influence a lot.

    • soumyav June 27, 2013 / 2:32 pm

      Yes Rekha! Its often said all in the mind, what we think becomes our action! better we always have a check and emanate good thoughts.

  6. vishalbheeroo June 27, 2013 / 2:08 pm

    Mighty Mighty, Soumya. ur style and by reading this beautiful poem, I cannot feel low as confidence rises:) Thanks for this one:)

    • soumyav June 27, 2013 / 2:33 pm

      🙂 Thts really nice that the lines uplifted you more! Its touching to know a poem too can infuse air of confidence.

  7. Rafiullah Mian June 27, 2013 / 3:26 pm

    Thought provoking !!!
    Yes indeed, negative motives weakens the mind and thoughts get sickness. Mind can fly hight n high with faith like your tinny butterfly beneath the “Shahtoot”! (This expression is so sweet!) The thought can tear open the earth and clashes with storms. Nice thoughts!

    • soumyav June 28, 2013 / 12:08 am

      Iam overwhelmed to read your thoughts about the poem Rafi. Very true that negativities weaken us,
      And the thought which is strong as faith can really erupt from the sealed earth. Thanks a lot for getting the essence out of it.

  8. Eric Alagan June 27, 2013 / 3:49 pm

    Mighty thoughts – yes, it all starts up there in the mists of one’s mind, I reckon.

    • soumyav June 28, 2013 / 12:05 am

      Thanks Eric for joining me in saying that aloud.

  9. Mridubala June 27, 2013 / 6:41 pm

    Indeed mighty thoughts, inspiring one!
    If possible please give feedback on my scribble Resilience,thanks

    • soumyav June 28, 2013 / 12:05 am

      Thanks dear and sure,will do so

  10. Anonymous June 28, 2013 / 2:02 pm

    What can I say? Am speechless – you know this. An ‘ashoka’ that infuses the heart. Loved it.

    • soumyav June 29, 2013 / 3:45 pm

      Iam touched that you felt and realized the vibration.

  11. ssd June 28, 2013 / 2:03 pm

    And, I have no idea why I appeared anonymous ! 😛

    • soumyav June 29, 2013 / 3:45 pm

      some WP error,I presume.

  12. SinPSarkar June 28, 2013 / 2:37 pm

    Thoughts are mighty for sure!
    It can break you when everything else is just perfect!
    It does make us when all else has shattered!

    Great poem! 🙂

    • soumyav June 29, 2013 / 3:46 pm

      Absolutely Pankaj! And I am so glad that this reached you in time. Good to see you here after so long!

  13. Manu Kurup June 28, 2013 / 8:57 pm

    loved the analogy of the molten wax! 🙂 Great poem…

  14. Debaroon July 1, 2013 / 6:48 am

    I’ve swiped away very negation, let’s see if I survive…Every word of yours provokes a lot of thought, and your USP= that flow in ur verse beams out loud…………very well written Soumya!

    • soumyav July 1, 2013 / 10:31 pm

      Iam so glad that you extracted the real meaning out of it. Iam sure,swiping away your negations would help you to find a way with clarity.
      Thanks a lot for being here.

      • Debaroon July 2, 2013 / 1:35 am

        check reader’s love 7 on my blog

  15. Bohemian July 2, 2013 / 3:23 pm

    A wonderful read. How little things can inspire jovial thoughts; the butterflies, the seeds. Its beautiful 🙂

    • soumyav July 3, 2013 / 10:01 am

      Thanks a lot ! Been a long time ,hope you are fine.

      • Bohemian July 5, 2013 / 11:12 pm

        Yes 🙂 Was just caught up!

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