FINAL GOODBYE!


PHOTOCREDIT:caroleknits.net

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Purple lilacs shone at the saffron horizon

Fallen dusk of twilight reminds

of a promise lying stagnant

in waters of derision…

nothing clears the scum

from a moribund layer

pleasant breeze pricked my skin

missed I the precious moments

when we lived together …

The enchanting moon glides and moves

in the ocean of sky

I stand beside the gate of death

awaiting you in every sigh

for the final communion to say

the world a goodbye.

23 thoughts on “FINAL GOODBYE!

  1. Stefania June 12, 2013 / 12:40 am

    Delightful! The lyrics touched my heart. Thank you for sharing!
    Big hugs, much love, Stefania!:)

    • soumyav June 12, 2013 / 10:25 am

      My pleasure Stefania! good to see you here!

  2. vishalbheeroo June 12, 2013 / 12:40 am

    Soumya, u often speak ma thoughts..super love and let’s enjoy the moment:)

  3. purpleraysblog June 12, 2013 / 12:56 am

    Double satisfaction….beautiful poem and Purple magic! Thanks and thanks.

    • soumyav June 12, 2013 / 10:25 am

      Oh Ya! I just noticed,Glad you are overjoyed!

  4. Edward Hotspur June 12, 2013 / 3:30 am

    Why are you leaving your blog? Or did I misunderstand. Oh, I get it. Why don’t you like bacon?

    • soumyav June 12, 2013 / 10:23 am

      :-):-) just a verse ,Edward! And yes ,I surely dnt eat bacons…:-)

    • soumyav June 12, 2013 / 10:21 am

      Thank you very much

  5. tornadoday June 13, 2013 / 12:45 am

    O, Soymyav, this one takes my breath away. I love it. ~ Bobbie

    • soumyav June 13, 2013 / 9:04 am

      :-) Iam humbled by your love dear!

  6. dilipnaidu June 13, 2013 / 8:52 am

    Lovely poem expressing touching sentiments. The Purple flowers are a perfect fit too.

    Many thanks.

  7. arabian roses June 17, 2013 / 9:51 pm

    heart-rending poem .Still it doesn’t fail to draw a smile on my face page:) gorgeous word painting

    • soumyav June 17, 2013 / 11:10 pm

      I like it tht this still leaves a smile for you!

    • soumyav June 19, 2013 / 10:47 am

      Thanks Suneesh for your visit and the kind words

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