Culpable is the evil that held the body in its grasp, inconceivable became to loosen the traction spellbound I remain !
With magical musings encircles a wand hypnotizing my senses with his beguiling charm…
I fail to figure beyond the drape dip in enamor in fancies fake Alas! I become a jade losing the fondness as an illusive lake… The evil vindicates the love for him, I turn around and
shy away from the daze! PHOTOCREDIT: en.wikipedia.org
Free will. 🙂 Or at least that’s what echoed in my mind when I read it. 🙂 Good one, Soumya.
there are many takes to this Manu! For me ,I tried to present the character of evil,which lures a person to fall prey into its web and like an illusion, the fantasy gets wiped ,leaving only a hazy thought and confusion.
That, i assume, is a fine thought. I might have been thinking about Mathew Arnold. Was reading his poems yesterday.
iam glad my poems give a different perspective to everyone,so I need not worry and should be more happy with various deciphers!
‘Tis very apt – a philosophy within its’ parameters – echoing humanity with weakness and in strength – of which both attributes reign over ourselves, ofcos at most times. Loved it – the whole verse. Keep shining !
I feel great to see you liked the idea and the thought… sometimes this weakness of a person creates an evil within and engulfs the strength of self and tries to affect another.
just amazing!
Thanks Sharmishtha
innocent and beautiful
Thank you Nirmal
Very Nice – 🙂
Good to see you liked and enjoyed
Mesmerizing! *bow to you*
Love & Best wishes,
Tanumoy
🙂 Thank you Tanumoy!
Wow Soumyav – this is incredibly powerful — felt a sense of being enraptured — and sinful surrender in reading …
“I fail to figure beyond the drape
dip in enamor in fancies fake
Alas! I become a jade
losing the fondness
as an illusive lake…”
Wonderful work dear friend ~ Enjoyed immensely~ RL
Much thanks and love Robyn for being here and reading this. An illusion or a faked emotion can have so many repercussions and like a drape it lies hidden.. Iam glad you loved this .