EVIL !


Culpable is the evil
that held the body
in its grasp,
inconceivable became to loosen the traction
spellbound I remain !
 
With magical musings
 encircles a wand
hypnotizing my senses
with his beguiling charm…
 
I fail to figure beyond the drape
dip in enamor in fancies fake
Alas! I become a jade
losing  the fondness
as an illusive lake…
 
The evil vindicates
the love for him,
I turn around  and
shy away from the daze!
 
 
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16 thoughts on “EVIL !

  1. Manu Kurup May 30, 2013 / 8:59 pm

    Free will.🙂 Or at least that’s what echoed in my mind when I read it.🙂 Good one, Soumya.

    • soumyav June 1, 2013 / 2:27 pm

      there are many takes to this Manu! For me ,I tried to present the character of evil,which lures a person to fall prey into its web and like an illusion, the fantasy gets wiped ,leaving only a hazy thought and confusion.

      • Manu Kurup June 2, 2013 / 8:35 am

        That, i assume, is a fine thought. I might have been thinking about Mathew Arnold. Was reading his poems yesterday.

        • soumyav June 2, 2013 / 8:40 am

          iam glad my poems give a different perspective to everyone,so I need not worry and should be more happy with various deciphers!

  2. memento mori May 31, 2013 / 2:45 am

    ‘Tis very apt – a philosophy within its’ parameters – echoing humanity with weakness and in strength – of which both attributes reign over ourselves, ofcos at most times. Loved it – the whole verse. Keep shining !

    • soumyav June 1, 2013 / 2:30 pm

      I feel great to see you liked the idea and the thought… sometimes this weakness of a person creates an evil within and engulfs the strength of self and tries to affect another.

  3. rajbgm May 31, 2013 / 3:48 pm

    Very Nice –🙂

    • soumyav June 1, 2013 / 2:22 pm

      Good to see you liked and enjoyed

  4. Tanumoy Biswas May 31, 2013 / 4:14 pm

    Mesmerizing! *bow to you*

    Love & Best wishes,
    Tanumoy

    • soumyav June 1, 2013 / 2:21 pm

      🙂 Thank you Tanumoy!

  5. Robyn Lee June 3, 2013 / 7:52 pm

    Wow Soumyav – this is incredibly powerful — felt a sense of being enraptured — and sinful surrender in reading …
    “I fail to figure beyond the drape
    dip in enamor in fancies fake
    Alas! I become a jade
    losing the fondness
    as an illusive lake…”

    Wonderful work dear friend ~ Enjoyed immensely~ RL

    • soumyav June 3, 2013 / 11:56 pm

      Much thanks and love Robyn for being here and reading this. An illusion or a faked emotion can have so many repercussions and like a drape it lies hidden.. Iam glad you loved this .

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