PICTURE IT & WRITE!- “As an heiress”

Written for Ermilia’s Picture it and Write!   http://wp.me/p1HrCI-16a




The scarlet floated in the air

touched the crystalline water clear

kissed by the reflected azure

I  lie  hereby with my dreams to endure!


With zillion dots to conjure

 a fantasy  in the serene atmosphere

enlivened by the words

those appeared

dwelt I deep

swirling  in the whirlpool

of  imaginary conjecture!


The moment still

freezes like a scene

As me floating

upon the misty lake

like a heiress of

 Aphrodite or Hera!



29 thoughts on “PICTURE IT & WRITE!- “As an heiress”

  1. vishalbheeroo May 19, 2013 / 5:58 pm

    superb..arre wah! ek ke baad ek iss kehta the Queen of Shayar:)

    • soumyav May 20, 2013 / 9:38 am

      🙂 Thank you for the new conferred title!

  2. joetwo May 19, 2013 / 11:06 pm

    I love the final line. There is a touch of the divine to that image.

    • soumyav May 20, 2013 / 9:39 am

      Thanks a lot for being here . I wanted to add the touch of beauty but with pure colours. Iam glad it turned out thus!

  3. Ankit Raj Bachchan May 19, 2013 / 11:54 pm

    First thing, the picture is breath-taking!! I was just gazing it. I’m not a poet but I, too, scribbled few lines. Loved it!

    And those lines ma’am, they truly justify the divine picture. The way you depicted the picture is bang on! 🙂

    P. S. – My words may seem sugar-coated but I never believe in buttering. I just that.. I like appreciating things. That’s it!
    So kindly don’t misunderstand 😉

    • soumyav May 20, 2013 / 9:43 am

      Thanks a lot Ankit fist of all for being here ! A huge welcome! And yes the picture is really stunning,I too got stuck to it. For the lines I believe what you say else my poem wouldn’t have been present in the midst of your story ! 🙂

      • Ankit Raj Bachchan May 20, 2013 / 4:54 pm

        No, I was always here, reading most of your posts. It’s just that I usually surf Internet on my phone and it’s painful, at times, to comment through phone, for me. There’s some log in issue with it. :/
        But I recently installed the WordPress app and will be commenting through it. 🙂

        • soumyav May 20, 2013 / 5:37 pm

          Thts really nice and really good to see you here on WP! 🙂

    • soumyav May 20, 2013 / 9:43 am

      wonderful to see you liked it Nirmal!

      • Nirmal Bajwa May 20, 2013 / 9:45 am

        it is nice indeed. waiting for ur next hindi post. 🙂

        • soumyav May 20, 2013 / 9:46 am

          oh! sorry had got stuck due to some server problem here and then some other work! shall be doing it soon!

          • Nirmal Bajwa May 20, 2013 / 9:48 am

            never mind. work is also important, poetry will come by its own at appropriate moment capable of stimulating your thoughts. 🙂

  4. kz May 20, 2013 / 9:59 am

    beautiful… heiress of Aphrodite or Hera… love it

    • soumyav May 20, 2013 / 10:32 am

      Oh! Thank you Kz! I knew you would love the line!

  5. Manu Kurup May 20, 2013 / 12:45 pm

    With zillion dots to conjure

    a fantasy in the serene atmosphere

    enlivened by the words

    those appeared

    dwelt I deep

    swirling in the whirlpool

    of imaginary conjecture!
    Loved these lines. I read, re-read and re-read it… Great one, Soumya. 😀

    • soumyav May 20, 2013 / 2:56 pm

      Thank you Manu ! Actually the picture itself was so intriguing,these were the instant lines of thought and I too myself read it again to think how deep they meant! 🙂

  6. Anne Schilde May 20, 2013 / 11:55 pm

    I really like the idea of floating above the water.

    • soumyav May 21, 2013 / 12:03 am

      Thanks Anne ,so glad to see you getting connected through the idea!

    • soumyav May 25, 2013 / 11:14 am

      Thanks a lot Sharmishtha!

  7. Ermilia May 28, 2013 / 1:56 am

    Very beautiful! Thanks for contributing to Picture it & Write, I’m glad you enjoyed the picture.

    • soumyav May 28, 2013 / 9:28 am

      welcome dear! and happy to be a part of your prompt!

  8. Robyn Lee May 29, 2013 / 7:22 pm

    May “dreams endure” forever ! This this is really stunning soumyav! Inspires my imagination in a wonderful way! Thank you 🙂 ~ RL

    • soumyav May 29, 2013 / 8:10 pm

      Thank you Robyn ! I loved it in your world the essence of every bit of nature and soul. Its great to have you here and Iam overwhelmed you liked this one!

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