Written for Ermilia’s Picture it and Write! http://wp.me/p1HrCI-16a
The scarlet floated in the air
touched the crystalline water clear
kissed by the reflected azure
I lie hereby with my dreams to endure!
With zillion dots to conjure
a fantasy in the serene atmosphere
enlivened by the words
those appeared
dwelt I deep
swirling in the whirlpool
of imaginary conjecture!
The moment still
freezes like a scene
As me floating
upon the misty lake
like a heiress of
Aphrodite or Hera!
superb..arre wah! ek ke baad ek iss kehta the Queen of Shayar:)
🙂 Thank you for the new conferred title!
I love the final line. There is a touch of the divine to that image.
Thanks a lot for being here . I wanted to add the touch of beauty but with pure colours. Iam glad it turned out thus!
First thing, the picture is breath-taking!! I was just gazing it. I’m not a poet but I, too, scribbled few lines. Loved it!
And those lines ma’am, they truly justify the divine picture. The way you depicted the picture is bang on! 🙂
P. S. – My words may seem sugar-coated but I never believe in buttering. I just that.. I like appreciating things. That’s it!
So kindly don’t misunderstand 😉
Thanks a lot Ankit fist of all for being here ! A huge welcome! And yes the picture is really stunning,I too got stuck to it. For the lines I believe what you say else my poem wouldn’t have been present in the midst of your story ! 🙂
No, I was always here, reading most of your posts. It’s just that I usually surf Internet on my phone and it’s painful, at times, to comment through phone, for me. There’s some log in issue with it.
But I recently installed the WordPress app and will be commenting through it. 🙂
Thts really nice and really good to see you here on WP! 🙂
nicely captured imagination.
wonderful to see you liked it Nirmal!
it is nice indeed. waiting for ur next hindi post. 🙂
oh! sorry had got stuck due to some server problem here and then some other work! shall be doing it soon!
never mind. work is also important, poetry will come by its own at appropriate moment capable of stimulating your thoughts. 🙂
beautiful… heiress of Aphrodite or Hera… love it
Oh! Thank you Kz! I knew you would love the line!
With zillion dots to conjure
a fantasy in the serene atmosphere
enlivened by the words
those appeared
dwelt I deep
swirling in the whirlpool
of imaginary conjecture!
Loved these lines. I read, re-read and re-read it… Great one, Soumya. 😀
Thank you Manu ! Actually the picture itself was so intriguing,these were the instant lines of thought and I too myself read it again to think how deep they meant! 🙂
I really like the idea of floating above the water.
Thanks Anne ,so glad to see you getting connected through the idea!
really nice. well done
amazing picture painted by your words!
Thanks a lot Sharmishtha!
Very beautiful! Thanks for contributing to Picture it & Write, I’m glad you enjoyed the picture.
welcome dear! and happy to be a part of your prompt!
May “dreams endure” forever ! This this is really stunning soumyav! Inspires my imagination in a wonderful way! Thank you 🙂 ~ RL
Thank you Robyn ! I loved it in your world the essence of every bit of nature and soul. Its great to have you here and Iam overwhelmed you liked this one!