Written for Ermilia’s blog:http://wp.me/p1HrCI-14o “PICTURE IT AND WRITE”


The mirror of life 
ornamental ,
exquisitely  intricate,
reflection is

 distinct and clear,
you  glow
 the skin radiates
the milky white 
of scintillating cleavage  clear!

Alas ! The wondrous pattern 
of  life remains always hidden,
bedecked on your gorgeous back
it is a mystery forever...
neither it explicates 
the logic...
nor the reason of
getting allured...
beautiful butterflies 
fly and allude
trying to convey a message unclear!

 there's no mirror at the rear,
to exhibit 
the truth surreal
Paint a face of vibrant colors
virtually visible to every peer!

32 thoughts on “PICTURE IT & WRITE- “MIRROR OF LIFE”

  1. The Real Cie April 21, 2013 / 2:58 pm

    I should rather not know what I look like from the rear!
    Lovely poem.

    • soumyav April 21, 2013 / 3:02 pm

      Ha ha! That nobody of us would want to ever ! It was metaphor! 😀

    • Ermilia April 21, 2013 / 10:42 pm

      Hahahaha I have a tattoo on my shoulder, but any lower than that, I’m with you 😉

      Thanks, Soumyav, for your participation this week.

      • soumyav April 22, 2013 / 10:20 am

        Welcome dear ,it was indeed my pleasure

  2. Uzoma April 21, 2013 / 3:24 pm

    Exquisite piece of poetry. It’s amazing how such pic could evoke on a sweet metaphor from a talented poet like you.

    • soumyav April 22, 2013 / 10:19 am

      Thanks Uzo! My eyes instantly got stuck over the mirror and there was no looking back! 🙂

    • soumyav April 22, 2013 / 10:19 am

      Thanks a lot Sir ! I feel great to know that you enjoy all my pieces even if they are just mere

  3. tornadoday April 21, 2013 / 11:03 pm

    Exquisite weaving of words from this image, Soumyav. Mirrors are magical, and allow us the ‘more often than needed’ chance to fall in love with ourselves. Love you this beautiful Sunday. ~ Bobbie

    • soumyav April 22, 2013 / 10:22 am

      Thanks Bobbie for letting us have a more insight of the reality of as mirror .true it does give a sense of self indulgence.

  4. Ese' s Voice April 21, 2013 / 11:10 pm

    Everything is in details…at least that’s what they usually say! 🙂 Beautifully penned, my dear!

    • soumyav April 22, 2013 / 10:22 am

      :-):-) Thanks Ese! loved to know you liked the details!

  5. kz April 22, 2013 / 5:26 am

    exquisite.. what a gift you have of words. ❤

    • soumyav April 22, 2013 / 10:24 am

      You flatter me Kz…Nowhere like your imagination!

  6. neenslewy April 22, 2013 / 12:15 pm

    beautiful butterflies
    fly and allude
    trying to convey a message unclear!

    Beautiful poetry – I loved your title and enjoyed reading your poem.

    • soumyav April 22, 2013 / 1:31 pm

      Thanks a lot Nina! Lovely to see you here enjoying my poem!

  7. lvsrao April 22, 2013 / 1:15 pm

    Great Poem. Excellent wording. Inspiring too.

  8. Marisa April 23, 2013 / 5:06 am

    Simply gorgeous. Enjoyed this one very much. Great work!

    • soumyav April 23, 2013 / 9:40 am

      Thanks Marisa and good to see you here

    • soumyav April 24, 2013 / 9:43 am

      Thank you dear for the wonderful share! And yes! I do already have three books of poetry published… more in queue 🙂

  9. Anonymous April 25, 2013 / 9:02 am

    Wowwwww.Its indeed a nice effort from ur side.
    Nicely adorned by ur thoughts & ideas.
    Hats Off……

    • soumyav April 25, 2013 / 9:41 am

      Thank you so much for the appreciation! May I know who’s this!

  10. joetwo April 25, 2013 / 9:33 pm

    Beautiful piece!

  11. Kavita Joshi April 26, 2013 / 9:40 am

    such a beautiful and lovely poem..thanks for sharing it dear

    • soumyav April 26, 2013 / 11:08 am

      welcome ! and much happy to see you here

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