Glowing balls in the sky 
sparkling with dazzled fire,
 Wishes mine are the embers
 Burning with bright desire...

Lost and lonely i was
 untill i heard your decision
 Molten thoughts flowed away
 While on way to your carnival...

You lived amidst the valley of flowers
 Where heaven was shy of
 The beauteous creation...

I stepped in your paradise
 echoed the words then in my ears,
 Of the song that we had hummed together...
 "There will a moment of bliss
 When you and my soul  shall meet...
 Inspite of lips being stitched
 Love will be in our eyes for each other..."

14 thoughts on “EMBERS !

  1. neelkanth April 18, 2013 / 11:09 am


    • soumyav April 18, 2013 / 2:08 pm

      So happy to see you enjoyed it Sir!

    • soumyav April 18, 2013 / 2:07 pm

      Thanks a lot dear !

  2. Wendell A. Brown April 18, 2013 / 11:32 am

    So refreshing to embrace your words early in the morning here! I love the image…both it and the poem are lovely!

    • soumyav April 18, 2013 / 2:07 pm

      Thanks Wendell for your generous words and visit!

    • soumyav April 18, 2013 / 2:11 pm

      Thank you Drake! 🙂

  3. dcardiff April 18, 2013 / 9:22 pm

    Hi Soumyav,
    I absolutely love the last verse of your poem. So much to look forward to, especially in the lines:

    “There will a moment of bliss
    When you and my soul shall meet…”

    I will be following your blog with eager anticipation.


    • soumyav April 19, 2013 / 11:55 pm

      Thanks a lot Dennis for your visit .Iam happy you felt the depth of the lines and enjoyed.

  4. drsuraiyanasim April 20, 2013 / 1:55 pm

    Sigh! This is so sweet and romantic saumi….very, very tender.

    • soumyav April 20, 2013 / 3:08 pm

      Really good that you reached here to read,as I knew this would touch you more.

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