flipping I flew
kissing your cheeks
With my soft wings
I fluttered  and encircled you
shrouding from
the scorched ray
of  sorrow...

wings of desire
A  butterfly I transformed into
from a caterpillar...
magical  touch
 yours was 
the gift of love
I welcomed
from the darkness
I  sprung ...
watching you philander
 I being coquette
for your pleasure!

Written for Edward's blog: Romantic Monday

Everything Before Romantic Monday.



44 thoughts on “BUTTERFLY KISS !

  1. shivprasad April 15, 2013 / 9:39 am

    it was soft, felt the feeling and was romantic…!!

    • soumyav April 15, 2013 / 9:44 am

      Mission successfully accomplished for the “Romantic Monday challenge” then! 🙂

  2. LAND OF FUN April 15, 2013 / 9:52 am

    Wonderful, amazing , so special 😀
    Have a nice day 😀

    • soumyav April 15, 2013 / 9:55 am

      Glad to know you enjoyed! 🙂

  3. Anonymous April 15, 2013 / 10:40 am

    I have rated it as Excellent as it possesses dazingly dazzling beauty in expression through sketches.

    • soumyav April 15, 2013 / 2:09 pm

      Iam honoured by the words of such praise.

    • soumyav April 15, 2013 / 2:08 pm

      Nice to hear that dear!

  4. Madhu April 15, 2013 / 12:09 pm

    Beautiful and sensous! Love the new look 🙂

    • soumyav April 15, 2013 / 2:08 pm

      Thanks a lot Madhu!

  5. Dilip April 15, 2013 / 1:24 pm

    Beautiful and soothing! Thanks Soumya.

    • soumyav April 15, 2013 / 2:09 pm

      Thank you Sir for your visit and for going through the lines

  6. Subhan Zein April 15, 2013 / 2:54 pm

    Loved this, happy to share it on Twitter! 🙂

    • soumyav April 15, 2013 / 5:35 pm

      Thanks Subhan! You are the one always sharing love and this one goes for it too! 🙂

  7. Rachna April 15, 2013 / 3:14 pm

    This is so lovely and romantic!

    • soumyav April 15, 2013 / 5:34 pm

      Thank you Rachna! Hope you are settling down !

      • Rachna April 16, 2013 / 9:50 am

        Hi Soumya! Thanks for your concern….yes I am back on track :). Once again started with my blog activities….how was ur sons exams…I am sure he did brilliantly in all exams…after all he is a son of loving and intellectual mother. Tk cr..

        • soumyav April 16, 2013 / 9:53 am

          🙂 You embarass me! Yes he did well and now started with the next class. Still it will be tougher for him now,as he is in 9th now.

          • Rachna April 18, 2013 / 1:20 pm

            No dear please don’t feel embarrassed it was my genuine compliment. I really mean it…..this is what i think about you. tk cr

    • soumyav April 15, 2013 / 5:34 pm

      So sweet of you to say that dear!

  8. Christy Birmingham April 15, 2013 / 8:42 pm

    So pretty in the words of emergence! Love that top photo as well

    • soumyav April 16, 2013 / 9:38 am

      Thanks a lot Christy

  9. Wendell A. Brown April 16, 2013 / 3:35 am

    I so love the colors and even more your words! I am a great lover of butterflies! A blessing to embrace today Soumyav…you always make me smile!

    • soumyav April 16, 2013 / 9:46 am

      Thank you Wendell. I too love the butterflies,they seem to carry a whole universe in their evolution… Thanks for your blessings too

  10. tornadoday April 16, 2013 / 5:21 am

    So very beautiful, Soumyav, and the words are perfect with the image! I love it. ~ Love, Bobbie

    • soumyav April 16, 2013 / 9:47 am

      Thanks a lot and so great you enjoyed the lines and image.

  11. Blood-Ink-Diary April 16, 2013 / 10:54 am

    Beautiful metamorphosis – elevating and blissful. Wah meri dost ! Keep penning – it’s lovely! xxx

    • soumyav April 16, 2013 / 10:59 am

      Thank you dear! a few lines for you ”
      Is zarra nawaazi par mein kya kahun,
      jab kabhi aapke labzon ne farmaya
      zikr mera,
      dil thahar gaya aur machalne laga,
      ki lo aagaya hai kisi chaman se
      yeh dost tera…
      jo khila dega gulshan ke saare phool yahan! 🙂

      • Blood-Ink-Diary April 16, 2013 / 11:11 am

        Wah!! Behad mamnoon hoon – for such a lovely reply. Am actually tearful – so moved by your loving and truthful heart – you are absolutely a gem to me !

        Aap ke liye beshumaar muhabbat aur dua, meri dost. Dil-shaad rahiyay hamaisha.

        So proud of you ! xxxx

        • soumyav April 16, 2013 / 2:10 pm

          Thank you dear! :-):-)

      • Blood-Ink-Diary April 17, 2013 / 10:39 am

        Soumy !! I have quoted your verse at my blog – was thanking Aparna for her comment and credited your lines – hope you did not mind, if you feel I should have asked you first, then I sincerely apologise for a grave mistake to have offended you – though knowing you, I feel you shall release me with a big hug ! *wishing*!! lol.
        The post I am talking about is ‘The Veiled Traveller’ ! 🙂
        Lots of love.

        • soumyav April 17, 2013 / 11:09 am

          It is absolutely fine Shaheen! What I quoted was an emotional expression in my few lines..you are free to use them as long as they fit your feelings! 🙂

          • Blood-Ink-Diary April 17, 2013 / 11:32 am

            You are such a brilliant writer and I value your writings very much. I must spend time at your blog during the upcming weekend – much to read from the 600 collection — and, no, I shan’t quote you anywhere before asking you first.
            You are such a gem – even Aparna thinks you are a superb writer. Blessing, love & hugs from your dost at Toronto.

            • soumyav April 17, 2013 / 11:34 am

              Thank you Dear for thinkng of spending time here.you are always welcome.. And dnt think so much abt the lines…its ok… I have tagged you in a a post of mine on my hindi blog and quoted the same lines.. just to say they were for you and special frnds of course..

              • Blood-Ink-Diary April 17, 2013 / 11:41 am

                You are such a lovely soul. As we Persians would say, chashme ba-duur ! I have immense admiration for you, meri dost.
                Thank you for such a lovely comment cum poem. *hugs*.

  12. Manu Kurup April 17, 2013 / 6:27 am

    It was 3D, to imagine and I could hear the thoughts flutter around me, escaping me every time I extended my hand to have a touch… amazing poem, Soumya.

    • soumyav April 17, 2013 / 11:07 am

      So happy to see you could visualize the lines and the imagery.. 🙂

  13. drsuraiyanasim April 20, 2013 / 2:05 pm

    Oh…..you know dear i will love this….anything about butterflies and i am automatically biased.. 😉 You have potrayed butterflies in such an endearing and lovely way….i send you some butterfly kisses myself… :* :* :* 😉

    • soumyav April 20, 2013 / 3:10 pm

      THt was really sweet Suri ! Yes the butterflies are always a thing of fascination and we always fall in love with them… :-* :-*

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