You returned back with silent steps
 I sensed the difference in the air
  which abruptly breezed 
   through my heart ...

disseminating your love
 yet again in my arms
  embracing the thoughts
   I breathe the air of your love
    fervidly to feel the fire...

without a word for me
  you quietly peep and disturb
   the rhythm of my thoughts
     playing the song of your love....

Written as per the :
Weekly Writing Challenge: Playing With Space.


23 thoughts on “SILENTLY!

  1. LAND OF FUN April 10, 2013 / 9:18 am

    So sweet song of Love !
    Amazing šŸ˜€

    • soumyav April 10, 2013 / 9:22 am

      šŸ™‚ Thanks a lot dear

  2. neelkanth April 10, 2013 / 10:00 am


    • soumyav April 10, 2013 / 10:16 am

      Feel happy Sir that you liked these simple lines!

  3. Trisha Dey April 10, 2013 / 10:53 am

    I don’t know how to put it in order Soumya ji! But that is exactly what I feel right now!! Seems as if you read my mind!!! šŸ˜‰ I loved it! Big hug!!!

    • soumyav April 10, 2013 / 10:59 am

      Much love back Trisha! Its always so nice to see you smile .Iam happy you liked the lines reflecting a mirror like of your mind!

  4. SinPSarkar April 10, 2013 / 8:32 pm

    This is such a post of relief! After a tiring day, this has surely refreshed me šŸ™‚

    • soumyav April 10, 2013 / 10:06 pm

      Its good to know that you actually felt refreshed . Hope you soon settle down with your changes and be active as before in writing!

  5. Tatsat April 10, 2013 / 9:01 pm

    Some day, when am loved/lovable enough, I might end up appreciating what you have written. But as of now, this all seems to be a figment of imagination.

    I hope I wrong.

    • soumyav April 10, 2013 / 10:08 pm

      This feeling is surely an imagination for the ones who are yet to realize or experience the depth and the intensity of it. It depends on circumstances in life which let you get the feel of it.

  6. Yoshiko April 11, 2013 / 10:01 pm

    Gives me the feeling of quietness then romance šŸ˜‰

    • soumyav April 12, 2013 / 12:02 am

      šŸ™‚ Thts really interesting!

      • Yoshiko April 12, 2013 / 12:04 am

        I tend to imagine when I read words because I’m a visual person šŸ™‚

        • soumyav April 12, 2013 / 12:06 am

          so my words actually spoke in silence to you! šŸ™‚

  7. lvsrao April 16, 2013 / 9:47 am

    Beautiful. Interesting.

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