You returned back with silent steps I sensed the difference in the air which abruptly breezed through my heart ... disseminating your love yet again in my arms embracing the thoughts I breathe the air of your love fervidly to feel the fire... without a word for me you quietly peep and disturb the rhythm of my thoughts playing the song of your love.... Written as per the : Weekly Writing Challenge: Playing With Space.
So sweet song of Love !
Amazing 😀
🙂 Thanks a lot dear
MOST POWERFUL AN EXPRESSION, SOUMYA.
Feel happy Sir that you liked these simple lines!
I don’t know how to put it in order Soumya ji! But that is exactly what I feel right now!! Seems as if you read my mind!!! 😉 I loved it! Big hug!!!
Much love back Trisha! Its always so nice to see you smile .Iam happy you liked the lines reflecting a mirror like of your mind!
Such a very gorgeous poem!
Thank you so much
This is such a post of relief! After a tiring day, this has surely refreshed me 🙂
Its good to know that you actually felt refreshed . Hope you soon settle down with your changes and be active as before in writing!
Some day, when am loved/lovable enough, I might end up appreciating what you have written. But as of now, this all seems to be a figment of imagination.
I hope I wrong.
This feeling is surely an imagination for the ones who are yet to realize or experience the depth and the intensity of it. It depends on circumstances in life which let you get the feel of it.
so very sweet!
Gives me the feeling of quietness then romance 😉
🙂 Thts really interesting!
I tend to imagine when I read words because I’m a visual person 🙂
so my words actually spoke in silence to you! 🙂
Yes 😉
Beautiful. Interesting.
Thank you !