In the air which I breathe,

I can experience  the nostalgic feel,

when I walk across the glowing  shrine,

that lies majestically beside the water

The morning Azaan wakes my soul

as if I was in my country’s soul,

the huge gigantic structure stands

overpowering the weakened thoughts….

the minarets reinstate the presence

of the UNIVERSAL Creator as the lifegiver

reassuring the feeble mind

there is a mystery that is eternal

and flows with time…


Whether I kneel in front of my lord,

or I stumble near a church

If I see through the beauty of the mosque,

I find HIM in every place

reigning the millions of heart along

he dwells in every breath of mine

like the air I breathed with time,

whether I hear a devotional song,

a carol of the Christmas,

or Allah in Quran!





27 thoughts on “UNIVERSAL CREATOR !

  1. Insight April 5, 2013 / 6:07 pm

    Wow! You have amazingly put all the major religions together, Dheedhi. Well written! 🙂


    • soumyav April 5, 2013 / 8:13 pm

      Thanks Rahul.Its only for the sake of names and identification,we have the different religions, rest every soul feels the same for his God.

    • soumyav April 5, 2013 / 8:12 pm

      So sweet of you GYs!

  2. neelkanth April 5, 2013 / 6:32 pm

    Just so lovely and beautiful. I have rated it as Excellent.

    • soumyav April 5, 2013 / 8:12 pm

      Iam honoured Sir! Its a humble note of gratitude towards the creator who manifests in different form.

    • soumyav April 5, 2013 / 8:11 pm

      All bestowed by the gracious wishes of everyone.

  3. Kamlesh Oraon April 5, 2013 / 7:38 pm

    Genuine thoughts……beautifully written loved it

    • soumyav April 6, 2013 / 10:14 am

      Happy to see you liked this Drake!

  4. Prateek Porwal April 6, 2013 / 10:50 am

    Thats a lovey thought of calling him universal creator.
    Been here after a long time and I loved it. 🙂

    • soumyav April 6, 2013 / 11:19 am

      great to see you back Prateek! 🙂 Yes he is always known by different names,why not give a common name then!

  5. Yes, our God is everywhere indeed. More like we are in his womb…like a child in the womb of her mother. That is what I felt and understood those few moments that I had died… Wonderful writing Soumyav. As always.

  6. drsuraiyanasim April 6, 2013 / 2:42 pm

    Breathtakingly gorgeous and moving saumi dear…how i missed reading your poems due to lack of time. The pic along with it is fascinating…..is it a masjid in dubai?

    • soumyav April 6, 2013 / 6:12 pm

      Thanks a lot Suri! Hope u r fine and its always great to find you here. Its a masjid in Sharjah,near our house.I took this picture during teh LIght festival.

  7. lvsrao April 7, 2013 / 10:41 am

    Excellent presentation.
    All Religions lead to one Society — that is Unique.
    Humanity is the soul of society.

    • soumyav April 7, 2013 / 10:48 am

      Thanks for reading and sharing your valuable opinion and view over this! I agree completely

  8. Manu Kurup April 8, 2013 / 8:26 am

    It is a great way of saying that all religions are pointing at one simple truth. Nice verse, Soumya. Loved the way about minarets. I have taken a particular liking to them since I used to go past the best one we have here. 🙂

    • soumyav April 8, 2013 / 3:38 pm

      Yeah! Hyderabad reigns the country in having the best one as Charminar! And whenevr I dopas through these here I see great splendour in the presence of a beautiful aura ..I really love the peaceful vibration I get when I pass this one thts near my house.

  9. Rachna April 8, 2013 / 11:52 am

    I just loved it! You have written so beautifully….we all comes from different religions, races yet we all are one belong to our creator. We all share a same bonding with our creator. Hope you are doing grt…missed reading your poems all this past month…wud go through all soon. Tk cr

    • soumyav April 8, 2013 / 3:28 pm

      Great to see you back Rachna! Yes Iam fine and hope you too had a good time! More than you ,I missed your sweet comments and conversation! Yes ! when we are the children of the same God,why the difference and discrimination regarding religions.

      • Rachna April 11, 2013 / 9:43 am

        Hi Soumya! Its really gud to knw that u mised my comments n conversation. It will take timeto be active on blog as still busy wid household chores. Hope u r doing grt. Belated happy birthday to little angel.

        • soumyav April 11, 2013 / 10:24 am

          Thanks a lot Rachna! And take care!

    • soumyav April 12, 2013 / 12:09 am

      Thank you Sharmishta

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