Written for TRIFECTA CHALLENGE- WEEK SEVENTY http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2013/03/trifecta-week-seventy.html
LUCKY (adjective)… The third meaning of lucky is to be used.
1: having good luck
2: happening by chance : fortuitous
3: producing or resulting in good by chance : favorable
As I hear few echoing sounds,
the striking waves rebound,
in the waters , in the winds,
carrying the fragrance of the dreams…
Flowing rivers carry the soul,
of the wishes that are just born …
moving from place to place,
dreams get distributed around…
Many choose the simpler ones,
some opt for the real tough ones,
but the lonesome struggler,
always desires for
a vibrant colorful one…
Challenges numerous ,
he colors his road,
brightly in red…
Dreams of passion ,
fantasy in thoughts,
striving in real…
for the chosen path…
The traveler dreams of something big,
aiming for the highest peak,
He who dares to walk alone,
with dab of patience and courage can go….
The path to the luciferous dream isn’t smooth,
curves and bends, cliffs and terrain will loom,
still the dynamic pedestrian walks,
for his decision is firm as a rock…
Overwhelmed too, the creator gets,
Seeing someone persevere in the best,
He too lends a helping hand,
to the walker in the distressed land…
Changing the course of the flow,
the Supreme one wants to show,
Faith and determination
Can transform the negative forces
into lucky energies favoring the soul!
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25 thoughts on “TRIFECTA CHALLENGE-THE DYNAMIC TRAVELER”
Your words always shine brightly and today they are shining awesomely! Very well done Soumyav!
Thank you so much Wendell
Beautiful as usual Soumyav! Looks like you are breaking your ‘off duty’ or, is the ‘busy time ‘ over?
Yes ! feels like breaking the busy time in between! yet to come back in my schedule,still managing to pop in between when I get time.
As always this is also marvelous one….loved the ways you use nature’s fantasy in the poem
Iam overwhelmed Kamlesh for your ever encouraging and complimentary words!
SO LOVELY, SOUMYA.
Dear Soumya, I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoy your wonderful poetry. It is a feast for my mind and my soul. You often present me with ‘new’ words, too. I love the ‘luciferous’ dream. Bless you, dear friend.
Many thanks Lizzie and Iam really touched that my words leave an impact and you like them.
Exquisite – tranquil – refreshing – acceptance – inspiration.
Wow! you summed everything here more beautifully and decorating my words. Thanks
just loved, loved, loved it!
🙂 Thank you Sharmishtha!
This is quite powerful. There are lots of amazing images painted by your words!
Thank you so much! Inspite of you being a wonderful writer ,you found something interesting here
This is a very hopeful poem, kind of meanders like a river.
Thanks for such a wonderful comment for this
Thanks you came across this.
A smooth transition from a lucid dreamer to a dynamic and persistent traveler. I just loved it. 🙂 Couldn’t have written it better.
Thank you Allwin! Its good to see you experiencing the journey thru my words.