Endless hours of fatigued veins
stretched ceaselessly in every direction in vain
rigorous outflow of thoughts
What else do they culminate into?
Strenuously the arteries pump
the life in form of blood
to every end of the anatomic pain
the invisible ache still
lies unheeded and strained?
What can be the soothing balm
to the tendons and the arms
of the innumerable thoughts and feels
magnifying every moment
in achieving worldly dream?
Neither pennies nor fame can heal,
the silent crumbling bones apart
Only genuine touch of love and warmth
innocent emotions
outpourings of the heart
compassionate nature
selfless care
Is all what can
heal the languished
ached part!
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Ah! Spring!>KB
🙂 Hmm
What an aptly chosen title, Soumyav. Love indeed is the remedy to the aching heart.
Great to see here Uzo! 🙂 Everyone requires a balm nowadays as the fast paced life leaves the soul exhausted
Beautiful poem, wonderfully written.
” Only genuine touch of love and warmth
innocent emotions
outpourings of the heart ”
very nicely quoted …
Thanks for liking and loving it
Nice, Soumya. Going through your lovely poem like this is itself a ‘soothing balm’ to many.
A lovely compliment Sir! Indeed you appreciated it to be of the effect of a balm
Dard bhi hey aur dard ki dawa bhi… Medicine of love is only love!
Aptly said Rukhsana!
Volumes of expression…..ur medicine is tuff to obtain but u cant do widout it…impressive
Yes tough to realize and acquire but an essential one,once we decide to be a balm to others we too get it in return,sometime somewhere
Your words are beautiful. I love the thought That love can cure anything.
So lovely that you could get connected!
Sri Soumyajee, Namaskaar.
It is the first time to come across your blog.
This poetry is very well expressed. Like a sugar that sweetens our tongue, the LOVE that enters the mind soothes the pain for ever and gives feeling that pain never existed at all!
yours friendly,
Madhava Rao.
Many thanks Madhava ji for being here ! Its wonderful to know about your thoughts as well about the poem and also about the facade of life. Iam happy you enjoyed the lines
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Absolutely beautiful! Love every word! 🙂
Thank you Ruby!
Our thoughts and feelings really need some relief…..beautifully expressed
Yes Kamlesh! Thts what we all go thru
That`s always something important to remember! Love heals, and beauty, and nothing else.
Absolutely true and rightly thought
Absolutely true and rightly thought
Love the image and your posting…you always open my eyes to so many different ways of looking at different things! God bless!
Thank you Wendell for looking through my perspective .Blessed to know you like it!
ur blog is awsome…..
Thank you very much Tanuj for going thru this!
How very true, Soumyav………. The wonders of the earth (blessings from above) are the only medicine we need…….. Love filtered down……. ~ Love, Bobbie
Glad Bobbie you like the words and the thought!
just loved it.
Thanks a lot
Yes, oh yes. That genuine touch. The sincerity of love, offered fully by an honest heart. In this is healing. Healing beyond anything I can imagine.
so glad to see you getting into the feeling of the lines! Yes such a healing is wondrous and beautiful
I think I know these lines 🙂
Being in itself, is the only way-out from it, I believe. Selfless love N all …. well they are not still released in the …… nope…just kidding.
Good one 🙂
Thanks for the introspective words here. Seems my piece led you to some kind of thinking
🙂 As always.
Excellent expression. Very nice composition .
Love is a state of mind within itself.
Yes truly stated! It cannot be shown or seen,it is ti be contained within
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It is caused by the fire displayed in the
post I read. And on this post THE SOOTHING BALM!
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