INSIGHT!


As the curls unfold, revealing thy nature,

a soft bosom is

discovered

 silently in

heart’s essence.

hard kernel visualized

and the hidden interior

soft smiles…

protruded like branches

piercing like thorn

the patience pays

when the hand touches the

rose after long!

Slowly and gently

picking and plucking

the prickles

it reaches the centre of attraction!

A solitaire takes years

to form,

forget not

it was

merely  a black coal

for long!

(PHOTOCREDIT:www.jagaro.net)

eyes-in-motion

32 thoughts on “INSIGHT!

  1. shivprasad March 13, 2013 / 8:57 am

    especially about the rose.. I just loved it…

  2. neelkanth March 13, 2013 / 9:03 am

    So sweet and lovely, Soumya. It’s nice.

    • soumyav March 13, 2013 / 2:38 pm

      Thank you Sir,Iam happy you liked.

  3. Wendell A. Brown March 13, 2013 / 10:40 am

    I love the beauty of your poem…your words touch softly and yet radiantly…God bless!

    • soumyav March 13, 2013 / 2:40 pm

      Its always so warm to see you here Wendell with your gentle words.

  4. Debaroon March 13, 2013 / 10:46 am

    Thank You for that inspiration..yes a solitaire takes years….wonderful , yet again

    • soumyav March 13, 2013 / 2:41 pm

      It was just a random write up..wthout a second thought I just went on! sometimes it does touch!

    • soumyav March 13, 2013 / 2:44 pm

      I love your view Millie! its actually with insight you see everything

  5. Ben Naga March 13, 2013 / 2:30 pm

    Insight is well worth pursuing … and celebrating!

  6. Tatsat March 13, 2013 / 2:35 pm

    Too much for my peanut sized brain, really🙂
    And that is quite an achievement…. Keep it up

    • soumyav March 13, 2013 / 2:58 pm

      :-):-) more of a compliment for me!😉

    • soumyav March 13, 2013 / 2:58 pm

      :-):-) more of a compliment for me!😉

  7. deanabo March 14, 2013 / 1:19 am

    This is very well written!

  8. takelight March 14, 2013 / 10:10 am

    Where Prose can no more express what the heart says, realm of poetry and music begins. well done Soumya, once again.

    • soumyav March 14, 2013 / 2:55 pm

      Thank you So much! Its nice to know you liked it

  9. Dilip March 14, 2013 / 10:22 am

    Beautiful and stirring thoughts! Thanks.

    • soumyav March 14, 2013 / 2:55 pm

      Iam really glad to see you here and reading this Sir.Welcome

  10. enozia March 14, 2013 / 1:29 pm

    Amazing post!

      • enozia March 14, 2013 / 4:40 pm

        🙂

  11. Subashini March 15, 2013 / 4:43 am

    Beautiful! Patience is really a virtue. I am amazed every time at way you observe things around which are surely reflected in all these amazing poems.

    • soumyav March 15, 2013 / 10:35 pm

      Its our observation and the inspiration from such small things which makes our life more beautiful.Thank you dear for liking this

  12. tornadoday March 16, 2013 / 1:11 am

    At the core of every beautiful thing, a spark of perfect imperfection. Beautiful, Soumyav and so very true! ~ Love, Bobbie

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