Quiet ,silent moments,

staring at the moon I suppress,

infinite emotions perturbed,

those got buried

within the deep bosom…

for the breeze flowed

and brushed

the feelings that I nurture

that are never realized at par.


When the night gracefully moves

the waves within do suffer a deluge,

how long before  final moment to come,

how far I wander

with the bruised soul,

comforting the pain ,

soothing the wounds,

when shall the

air of false hope

finally burst!


Nox is the witness

for the solitude,

reigning the time

when thoughts are in multitude.

The dawn breaks

the darkened image.

A ray of hope again reflects,

for the change

that is unseen,

with many promises

yet to be fulfilled…








23 thoughts on “UNFULFILLED PROMISES !

    • soumyav February 28, 2013 / 10:09 am

      Yes !Thank you Bjorn

    • soumyav February 28, 2013 / 10:09 am

      Yes !Thank you Bjorn

  1. neelkanth February 28, 2013 / 9:46 am

    Let the promises be fulfilled, that is what I earnestly wish.

    • soumyav February 28, 2013 / 10:14 am

      🙂 Thank you Sir

  2. lvsrao February 28, 2013 / 12:15 pm

    Excellent. Inspirational poem.
    Death takes place when lessons assigned for that lifetime have been learnt.
    A soul is given free-will to exercise this option of staying close to God during earth life time. This divine intervention helps to keep the script short and crisp. When the soul has experienced all the human dimensions and realized its own True Nature, the last chapter of Life Note Book is completed and the Life Note Book is finished

    • soumyav February 28, 2013 / 2:45 pm

      Thank you very much for sharing your precious view and thoughts.

  3. Neeraj February 28, 2013 / 12:19 pm

    I always have to look at the dictionary.. your vocabulary knowledge is commendable 😀

    • soumyav February 28, 2013 / 2:45 pm

      🙂 Not exactly,I too have to use a dictionary!

  4. 1EarthUnited February 28, 2013 / 12:52 pm

    Soumyav, you reflect upon the deepest visions of life. ☼

    • soumyav February 28, 2013 / 2:46 pm

      Iam obliged that you find the poems of such worth

  5. lgyslaine February 28, 2013 / 1:59 pm

    Beautiful poem. the night takes us into many reflections 🙂

    • soumyav February 28, 2013 / 2:48 pm

      Am glad you liked this Gys!

  6. Madhu March 1, 2013 / 12:24 am

    A beautiful progression from despair to hope! Great job, yet again 🙂

    • soumyav March 1, 2013 / 12:45 am

      Thanks a lot Madhu! we always have a hope living even after much despair 🙂

  7. Subashini March 1, 2013 / 10:56 am

    Wonderful poem! From darkness to light. It’s always a journey isn’t it?

    • soumyav March 1, 2013 / 4:31 pm

      very true Subashini.Thank u

  8. Marylin Warner March 3, 2013 / 8:08 am

    The “…witness for the solitude…” is a lovely phrase tucked within beautiful prose.
    Well done.

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