The arrow knoweth not,
where to hit
when to dart ,
with what speed,
the string is the one which pulls it strong,
giving the force to dash across
oblivious of the focus along…
The aim creates illusion of multitude,
confusing the arrow and the bow
in longitude…
What shall then make the target hit,
a steady hand or a focused mind to read,
the right moment
or the accurate pull or the perfect resile?
Configuring the three in a stream,
converging the aim to a point of dream,
surrendering himself to the invisible hands,
the archer
forgets the chaotic unrest
Reassured and guaranteed,
that the aim will be hit,
in the perfect moment
to enjoy the bliss.
(PHOTOCREDIT:www.atarn.org)
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All the factors so envisaged by you make them worth to target a goal when taken as a composite measure. Nice, Soumya. I have rated your poem as an excellent one.
Thank you very much! Iam happy that you liked it.
Exquisite Soumya! What a beautiful metaphor for expressing the unseen grace of God, and the blessings bestowed to us all. ♥
Many thanks for seeing through the lines and getting the meaning of it.
❤ Beautiful.
So exact. I love how you do that, Soumyav.
Thanks a lot dear ,so glad that you liked it!
splendid.
Thanks Nirmal
Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww..Now, Soumya this has to be the finest of your works..Amazingly drawn…perfect words,.,,Will share this on facebook….
Thanks a lot Deba! Its really good to know that you liked this.
Beautiful!
🙂 So happy to see u here enjoying this!
Let’s hope it is only target practise and not some living soul that receives this “bliss”
🙂 I wonder
🙂 I wonder
I always love what comes to life from your pen!!!! God bless !!
Thank you so much Wendell for always being so appreciating and encouraging
its so, so deep soumyav! you have a very very wise, analytical mind.
:-)what a analysis dear! Thanx… Iam flattered
🙂
Wow… beautiful… the perspective which you have is really awesome.. I think I should learn from you a lot..
Thank you Shiv,I think we all tend to accept this perspective at many times in our life when situations are out of our hands.
What more can I say than simply beautiful, my friend…
Thanks a lot 🙂
I am always at awe at the splendid thoughts behind your words! Its beautiful.
Thank you Subashini
Thank you Subashini
“Reassured and guaranteed,
that the aim will be hit,
in the perfect moment
to enjoy the bliss.”
Awsome!!!
Thank you Arindam!
Thank you Arindam!
Oh my gosh! The plot you have took for this stuff is seriously a brilliant attempt. Nicely written, dear one. ❤ 🙂
Rahul
Thanks a lot Rahul.Glad you enjoyed and liked.
The mechanics of targeting… achieving something with hard work, considering all the forces at work. Great work, Soumya. So brilliantly told…
Thank you Manu! Doesn’t the same apply for life ,for our goals? everything needs to be in place with co ordination
Thank you Manu! Doesn’t the same apply for life ,for our goals? everything needs to be in place with co ordination
love it 🙂
Thank you!