The search for the unknown continues…
groping in the dark ,
fumbling in the blues,
walking forth in light,
ahead lies a horizon,
a mirage…
an illusion,
a hallucination …
which moves away and vanishes,
as I try to touch
with my fingers…
The colored sky envelopes ,
speaking volumes of mute varsity,
reflecting images of the world,
unknowingly …
I think again,
how would be
my tryst with destiny…
Destiny which like a veiled maiden,
conceals her gorgeous face,
playing hide and seek
with enchanting eyes,
whenever I try to find her trace ,
Through the golden mist,
She becomes obscure
the unknown search continues…forever.
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Great poem Soumya! That is the angst now!
very true Aparna! we all have it within..
Speaks of much sort of an inquisitiveness on your part when you talk of the Unknown with your eyes glued to horizone. Nice, Soumya.
Thanks a lot Sir! indeed its the hope of future that we all see and foresee through our eyes .,while we focus our vision to the horizon.
If you believe in astrology, an astrologer might help to answer your questions… hahaha! Nice poem Soumya. 🙂
Funny Ramu Das.
I agree though – a thoughtful poem, Soumya.
Thanks a lot dear for liking and for your visit here!
🙂 Tht was a wonderful comment Ramu! sure ! but astrologers too get confused nowadays! 😉
So long as you seek destiny in the sky it will remain veiled, obscure and unknown. Look within, seek with your spirit at the lotus feet of your creator and you will find your destiny and all the unsolved mysteries of life. Good poem!
Thank you Udo! It was really soothing to hear your thoughts and believe me I too have the same.These lines were just written out of context. I just wrote whatever flowed in then,without thinking
What a lovely world creation
have good weekend
Thank you so much Stefan and you too have a wonderful weekend!
beautifully written
Thank you Nirmal! its really good to see you after long.hope all is fine
thanks for your wishes, yeah all is fine, sometimes work keep you busy or sometimes we want to be aloof.
Yes thts true! hope to read more from you now!
yeah sure and same for you also
Beautiful and thoughtful pattern of words, my dear
thank you dear
Elusive destiny – interesting Soumya, because I wrote a poem about Destiny too and scheduled to post it next week.
wow! thts great.would be interesting to see your version of Destiny! this one though wasn’t on my cards,just an impulsive thought
This is brilliant !
Thanks a lot dear! Iam really happy to see you here enjoying!
Nice pairup of great poem and beautiful pic, Soumya! Brightened up my morning. 😀
So glad Eric that it shone your morn! 🙂
amazing poem soumyav so full of wisdom and beauty! life truly is mystery.
yes it is a wonderful one,every step there is a new turn and twist.
Reblogged this on Ordinary girl's peculiar blog.
THanks Moniba for reblogging!
thought provoking
Thanks for thinking so!
you are more than welcome
your mind is like an infinite constellation
🙂 thts a wonderful compliment! Thanks
check this video u r create your poems like that http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rfreXcnNhpA
Thank you for sharing the link and its awesome. I have still a long journey before I reach there.
u will one day.
i am still contemplating my story
Thank you for the encouragement
I hope we can together and experiment new styles of story-telling
Hope and try! 🙂
thats a wonderful metaphor!!
Thank you
Such is life! One of your best Soumya.
Thanks a lot Madhu! Its great to see you liked!
Beautiful rhythms found alive in your words and you image a delight to embrace. your words always move me dear sister. What is unknown is always before us, but what is inside of us is always near…and i treasure that beauty within you that comes to life in your words and your poems! God bless Soumyav, and much love always to you my sister!
True Wendell ,the future is unknown and so is the nest destination,but if we know our final destination and the path,it doesn’t matter..Thanks
Destiny like a veiled maiden,
conceals her gorgeous face,
playing hide and seek
with enchanting eyes…
Beautiful lines. 🙂
Thank you Allwin! 🙂