BE LIKE …


BE LIKE…

An Ocean of love,

like  a pearl of wisdom,

a river of affection,

a tree of protection.

firm as  a mountain,

soft as the melting wax,

Radiate as the sun,

 soothing as the moon,

sparkle like a diamond,

burn like a  coal to fuel the soul.

.

.

.

FOR YOU’RE…

The  flower of joy,

with  the fragrance of  musk,

the muse of  my verse

the life of my spirit

enkindled within,

smile of  innocence…

affectionate ,

touching…

burning  ember  of my heart,

the  presence of an angel in a human form.

(PHOTOCREDIT:kalosysart.deviantart.com)

Glowing_soul_by_Kalosys

47 thoughts on “BE LIKE …

  1. humblepye February 20, 2013 / 2:27 pm

    Oh wow!
    This is so very beautiful!:-)

    • soumyav February 20, 2013 / 3:52 pm

      Thank you John! so good to know that you liked.:-)

  2. shivprasad February 20, 2013 / 2:41 pm

    truly, atleast one should learn a prt of these… wonderful…

    • soumyav February 20, 2013 / 3:51 pm

      Yes the qualities that a person should have in him is there in every bit of nature

  3. deanabo February 20, 2013 / 3:07 pm

    This is very uplifting and beautiful.

  4. neelkanth February 20, 2013 / 3:17 pm

    Fragrance of musk is vividly manifestable in your writings.

    • soumyav February 20, 2013 / 3:48 pm

      Iam overwhelmed by your comment Sir!

  5. Lucia Angelo February 20, 2013 / 4:22 pm

    wow beautiful
    ♥ these words ” burn like a coal to fuel the soul “. great feel ..

    • soumyav February 20, 2013 / 4:25 pm

      Thank you Lucia! I know they are the real crude words of dictionary which do add the fuel!:-)

  6. Eric Alagan February 20, 2013 / 5:22 pm

    A symphony of imagery and verse Soumya.
    Enchanting,
    Eric

    • soumyav February 20, 2013 / 11:57 pm

      Its worth awaiting your comment Eric,for you have the true definition of my verse.

  7. lgyslaine February 20, 2013 / 6:12 pm

    I love it, it is soft and beautiful all at once:)

    • soumyav February 20, 2013 / 11:56 pm

      Iam happy Gys that you love dit!

  8. johncoyote February 20, 2013 / 7:56 pm

    Beautiful artwork and amazing words of love and desire. Thank you.

    • soumyav February 20, 2013 / 11:55 pm

      Thank you John!

  9. Nirmal Bajwa February 20, 2013 / 7:58 pm

    i feel just b yourself (b in the way god has made you, you are d only one of your kind):-)

    • soumyav February 20, 2013 / 11:54 pm

      Thts very true Nirmal,but I think we should strive to be better always,that which we can be…

  10. Wendell A. Brown February 20, 2013 / 7:59 pm

    So very outstanding Soumyav! My heart smiles at every line and every word in your poem…so beautifully done! Great Job!

    • soumyav February 20, 2013 / 11:54 pm

      Iam happy Wendell you could feel the depth of it!

  11. Tatsat February 20, 2013 / 9:07 pm

    Lovely !
    My favourite would be :
    “burn like a coal to fuel the soul.”.

    Lot of paradoxes around here:) You doing alright ?

    • soumyav February 20, 2013 / 11:53 pm

      :-) Hmm! just a thought of how we should be

  12. George Ellington February 20, 2013 / 10:31 pm

    How lovely this is! To embrace one’s muse. To find comfort and solace and a soothing rhythm of hope in the heart of another. There is something so mystifying about love. Yet something so very physical in the metaphors we employ to express it.

    • soumyav February 20, 2013 / 11:52 pm

      For more than expressing we try to manifest it in everything and we end up using physical metaphors for such expressions.There is something unique about love,it is a feeling,an emotion,a virtue and a vibration… so the mystery continues. Thanks for sharing your feelings George!

      • George Ellington February 21, 2013 / 9:36 am

        My great pleasure, Soumyav. I appreciate your writing. And your comments.

    • soumyav February 21, 2013 / 9:24 am

      Thank you so much Christy!:-)

  13. sharmishtha basu February 21, 2013 / 11:23 am

    what an amazing poem soumyav! its truly beautiful in and out- the word play and the inner meaning.

  14. Insight February 21, 2013 / 1:11 pm

    Beautifully written!:)

    Rahul

  15. The Other Side of Ugly February 21, 2013 / 1:23 pm

    My all time favorite. So full of wisdom and Beauty, as well as human potential! Bravissimo!

    • soumyav February 21, 2013 / 1:49 pm

      :-):-) loved your superlative exclamation Sheri!

  16. zygerina February 21, 2013 / 2:07 pm

    wow! its beautiful just like you!

  17. Rachna February 21, 2013 / 2:28 pm

    Soumya! It’s just so lovely…every word. I am not so expressive with words but I can surely tell that every time I read your lovely words gives me wonderful feeling…heart touching.

    • soumyav February 21, 2013 / 4:15 pm

      :-)And I do await the comment I would be getting,for that would reflect the intensity with which it touched.

  18. Eric February 22, 2013 / 12:13 am

    From another universe… Other-worldly…😀

  19. msuzanneb February 22, 2013 / 2:44 am

    WoW! Everytime I read this I feel great joy from your words. It is beautiful and speaks of the beauty you share. Thank you, mary

    • soumyav February 22, 2013 / 10:59 am

      So good to see you here Mary! been a very longtime and i too missed your posts! will be there soon.

  20. Mira Jay February 22, 2013 / 3:38 pm

    Soothing flow dear Soumya; like a prayer for me..

    Peace & Light

    • soumyav February 22, 2013 / 3:48 pm

      Thanks for your love MIra! Really glad you could feel the air

    • soumyav February 22, 2013 / 3:48 pm

      Thanks for your love MIra! Really glad you could feel the air

  21. tornadoday February 22, 2013 / 11:05 pm

    How beautiful, Soumyav. I grieve for those who do not, but rejoice in the rare ones who know love, who understand it. Who freely give of themselves, asking only for a soft place to fall. I love this! ~ Ever, Bobbie

    • soumyav February 23, 2013 / 10:20 am

      you speak of true feelings Bobbie,irrespective of being fallen or giving in, your emotions always have an exquisite thought!

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