SHARDS


Millions of stars weep today in this hour of sleep,

when drops of tear drench the  soul,

twinkle of the hope gets  bleak,

for  in this moment the time freezes ,

when you move out of my sphere…

Letting your hands go off my hold,

your touch dampens my sense,

My heart echoes with your words,

“I have to leave you my love ,

bereaved and bereft.”

Dispersed are the shards of my heart,

loosely in  the air,

flinging across thousand oceans ,

colourless and lovelorn…

My feelings will now be buried within,

the pristine thoughts  shall  be entombed,

for my voice can never reach you …

Only my verses will  live forever.

(PHOTOCREDIT:pieceofkarma.blogspot.com)

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45 thoughts on “SHARDS

    • soumyav February 19, 2013 / 10:18 pm

      Thank you Meenakshi!

  1. neelkanth February 19, 2013 / 5:40 pm

    Nice one. I wish your ‘….verses will live forever’.

    • soumyav February 19, 2013 / 10:17 pm

      Thank you Sir for the wonderful wish!

    • soumyav February 19, 2013 / 10:17 pm

      Iam humbled by your words

  2. meiro February 19, 2013 / 5:49 pm

    This is beautiful …indeed.

    Love,
    mei

    • soumyav February 19, 2013 / 10:17 pm

      sometimes pain is beautiful even if hurting!

  3. Subhabrata Dasgupta February 19, 2013 / 6:22 pm

    Your poems are simply beautiful. “Only my verses will live forever” – what an amazing line!

    • soumyav February 19, 2013 / 10:15 pm

      Good to hear form you Subh! I too love the last line,for it is very near to the heart

  4. spinningblackbirds February 19, 2013 / 6:49 pm

    When drops of tear drench the soul..
    I know this feeling well,
    and so wish I had written this poem.
    Beautiful

    • soumyav February 19, 2013 / 10:14 pm

      Thank you for thinking so!

  5. Nirmal Bajwa February 19, 2013 / 9:05 pm

    may b a harmony will also b shared forever ( in all lives).

    • soumyav February 19, 2013 / 10:11 pm

      Thank you dear! good to see u

  6. deanabo February 20, 2013 / 1:13 am

    Simply Beautiful

    • soumyav February 20, 2013 / 2:03 pm

      Thank you So much Edward! 🙂

  7. Sloan February 20, 2013 / 2:19 am

    Absolutely Beautiful!
    Love & Light, S

    • soumyav February 20, 2013 / 8:54 am

      nice to see you here Sloan! Glad that you liked this

  8. The Other Side of Ugly February 20, 2013 / 10:52 am

    Millions of stars weep today in this hour of sleep,

    when drops of tear drench the soul,

    PERFECT AND TRUE. So well done dear friend. Truly.

  9. Eric Alagan February 20, 2013 / 1:22 pm

    Like the way you capped it off – resonates for me as verses will never die 🙂

    • soumyav February 20, 2013 / 1:44 pm

      🙂 Oh ! yes very much similar to your blog title Eric! I recollect it now

  10. Uzoma February 20, 2013 / 1:57 pm

    As always you conjure beautiful words…so exquisite I can’t help but come back for more.

    • soumyav February 20, 2013 / 2:01 pm

      And your beautiful shower of lyrical rhythm is wonderful.Thanks Uzo

  11. George Ellington February 20, 2013 / 10:40 pm

    It does feel this way, doesn’t it? A shattering outward, a contracting within. Like the heart itself, the lungs, the tissue of this being–expanding and contracting. A sign of the life that yet courses through this frame. Yet nothing of the life within. The heart can beat and beat and yet never be seen, never be sensed, not even by those for whom it truly beats. Until one stops to ponder–why does it beat at all. There is purpose in this life, yes? There is meaning in this heart. It is a joy to all of us here that you have chosen to share yours with us.

    • soumyav February 20, 2013 / 11:50 pm

      So happy to hear from you George ! and its really touching to read your thoughts as well about this !

  12. Gretchen O'Donnell February 20, 2013 / 10:56 pm

    “Letting your hands go off my hold” – I like that a lot. Thanks so much for stopping by my blog!

    • soumyav February 20, 2013 / 11:46 pm

      Its nice to see you here too! glad that you enjoyed

    • soumyav February 21, 2013 / 9:21 am

      Thank you Wendell!

  13. Insight February 21, 2013 / 2:42 pm

    Liked the mosaic expressions you used in this notable piece! 🙂

    Rahul

  14. Allwin Bright February 22, 2013 / 5:47 pm

    For me it’s the last line. – Only my verses will live forever. I keep coming back to this line again and again.

    Indeed your verses will live forever. 🙂

    Such a beautiful, beautiful poem.

    • soumyav February 22, 2013 / 8:35 pm

      THank you Allwin ,I feel honoured and lucky enough to hear this.

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