You’re a rare fruit to pluck from the garden of Eden,
saturated with nectarous drink,
lustrous and shining as if
burnished by the touch of cupid!
On the cumbersome branch as you swayed,
apple of the exotic garden ,
attracted and appealed,
eyes of this Adam’s forage!
Fall in the cup of my palms,
feel thy touch of my warmth,
before I sense and taste your essence,
disseminate your love in abundance.
(PHOTOCREDIT:littlestepshome.blogspot.com)
soumyav 
Aah! And then from rare becomes a forbidden fruit! 🙂 lovely lines, Soumya.
🙂 I was just waiting for someone to come and comment on it ,coz didn’t knew what had been the outcome of these lines.
I liked it.. Starting from the perspective of an apple and then the focus moving to Adam’s keen interest in it… It flowed really well.
good at least someone really liked.. 🙂
Impatience impatience hehe.. You’ve just posted, wait for sometime and you’ll have others echoing my views..:-)
he he hee ! 🙂 🙂 u made me roll down with laughter!
🙂
Before I sense and taste your presence. The forbidden fruit is always the most desirous…
🙂 True Sheri that is why I tried to put forth a different angle!
Love the way you plucked the fruit and made it your own – wonderful architecture Soumya dear.
Cheers, Eric
Iam happy that you liked this one and enjoyed the imagery!
You always write moving and beautiful poems. I enjoyed your poem
Thank you so much Wendell .your words mean a lot
Rare fruit! I don’t think it is a ‘forbidden fruit’; even if it is, it carries much of a taste feeling wise.
I tried to highlight that here .Thanks for this
It is fantastic Soumya! Hats off 🙂
🙂 Thank you Vinay!
There is a feeling of reverence to this piece, and also divine seduction. I love it, Soumyav. ~ Ever, Bobbie
Thank you so much dear and Iam really happy to know that u loved it