You’re a rare fruit to pluck from the garden of Eden,

saturated with nectarous drink,

lustrous and shining as if

burnished by  the touch of cupid!

On the cumbersome branch  as you  swayed,

apple of the exotic garden ,

attracted and appealed,

eyes of  this  Adam’s  forage!

Fall in the cup of my palms,

feel thy touch of my warmth,

before I sense and taste your  essence,

disseminate your love  in abundance.





19 thoughts on “A RARE FRUIT !

  1. muZer February 10, 2013 / 10:14 am

    Aah! And then from rare becomes a forbidden fruit! 🙂 lovely lines, Soumya.

    • soumyav February 10, 2013 / 10:15 am

      🙂 I was just waiting for someone to come and comment on it ,coz didn’t knew what had been the outcome of these lines.

      • muZer February 10, 2013 / 10:25 am

        I liked it.. Starting from the perspective of an apple and then the focus moving to Adam’s keen interest in it… It flowed really well.

        • soumyav February 10, 2013 / 10:26 am

          good at least someone really liked.. 🙂

          • muZer February 10, 2013 / 10:31 am

            Impatience impatience hehe.. You’ve just posted, wait for sometime and you’ll have others echoing my views..:-)

            • soumyav February 10, 2013 / 10:32 am

              he he hee ! 🙂 🙂 u made me roll down with laughter!

  2. The Other Side of Ugly February 10, 2013 / 11:13 am

    Before I sense and taste your presence. The forbidden fruit is always the most desirous…

    • soumyav February 10, 2013 / 1:50 pm

      🙂 True Sheri that is why I tried to put forth a different angle!

  3. Eric Alagan February 10, 2013 / 11:21 am

    Love the way you plucked the fruit and made it your own – wonderful architecture Soumya dear.

    Cheers, Eric

    • soumyav February 10, 2013 / 1:49 pm

      Iam happy that you liked this one and enjoyed the imagery!

  4. Wendell A. Brown February 10, 2013 / 5:49 pm

    You always write moving and beautiful poems. I enjoyed your poem

    • soumyav February 10, 2013 / 6:24 pm

      Thank you so much Wendell .your words mean a lot

  5. neelkanth February 10, 2013 / 6:05 pm

    Rare fruit! I don’t think it is a ‘forbidden fruit’; even if it is, it carries much of a taste feeling wise.

    • soumyav February 10, 2013 / 6:24 pm

      I tried to highlight that here .Thanks for this

  6. feelmearound February 11, 2013 / 8:45 am

    It is fantastic Soumya! Hats off 🙂

    • soumyav February 11, 2013 / 8:46 am

      🙂 Thank you Vinay!

  7. tornadoday February 11, 2013 / 8:40 pm

    There is a feeling of reverence to this piece, and also divine seduction. I love it, Soumyav. ~ Ever, Bobbie

    • soumyav February 11, 2013 / 10:48 pm

      Thank you so much dear and Iam really happy to know that u loved it

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