SMOKE!


Embraced your absence with fragrance of my soul,

I lived every moment in flowers of zephyr,

those which coloured my colourless sight,

their essence  filled my heart’s  nectar…

 

With open arms I welcomed,

the   gentle wind that traveled 

absorbed within the feel of you,

it sprayed the mist of your presence.

 

Beside the shores where i walked,

the setting sun smiled and laughed,

for the waves came kissed me goodbye,

and i still awaited your sight…

 

Enthralling night ,the moon shone high,

I sat with noises of turbulent sighs,

The smoke of the chimney rose ,

The saucepan burnt ….

 

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(PHOTOCREDIT:artprintsworld.com)

                                     

27 thoughts on “SMOKE!

  1. Hira Nazir February 7, 2013 / 9:56 pm

    Hey Sweets,
    This is really awesome. I soo loved reading it. The sharp imagery and theme. Too good.:)

    • soumyav February 8, 2013 / 1:03 am

      Thank you so much dear and loved reading your comment too

    • soumyav February 8, 2013 / 1:03 am

      Thank you so much dear and loved reading your comment too

  2. Subhabrata Dasgupta February 7, 2013 / 10:30 pm

    I love this picture and the visual imagery created by the words. I’m really amazed at this quality of yours. You can make the reader visualize a separate world in which your words come true.

    • soumyav February 8, 2013 / 1:04 am

      Iam so happy Subh you could be a part of that world and could feel and imagine the scene. Thank you

  3. Wendell A. Brown February 8, 2013 / 3:17 am

    So very exquisite and beautiful to embrace… a wonderful poem my sister…truly wonderful!

    • soumyav February 8, 2013 / 3:04 pm

      Am so glad you could enjoy the feel of this poem.Thanks Wendell

  4. Eric February 8, 2013 / 3:23 am

    Soumya, your stove’s soooooo hot, I can’t touch it! Let me go take a cold shower!😉

    • soumyav February 8, 2013 / 3:04 pm

      :-):-) great comment Eric

  5. meiro February 8, 2013 / 6:47 am

    Love reading this dear friend… it’s wonderful.

    Big hugs,
    mei

    • soumyav February 8, 2013 / 3:06 pm

      Thank you so much Mei!

  6. yerpirate February 8, 2013 / 12:24 pm

    Wonderful words! How I’ve missed them…and beautiful style of blog I must say! Long time since my visit – really like this style!

    • soumyav February 8, 2013 / 3:14 pm

      Lucky day for me ! :-)Thanks for your words and appreciating the new look. And most of all for your visit here today after a very long time.

  7. JasmineKyleSings February 8, 2013 / 4:21 pm

    I HATE being so distracted you burn what ever your cooking… I usually have great composure but if I burn dinner you KNOW something’s wrong.

    • soumyav February 8, 2013 / 4:22 pm

      :-):-) thts really good Jasmine..do u know I wanted to add one more line in the last…” saying the pan burns waiting for your fish,my fisherman!😉

      • JasmineKyleSings February 8, 2013 / 4:55 pm

        :) I think that’s where a good woman can’t hide her problems! I’ll be happy when I won’t be cooking anymore! All of my secrets will be safe forever!

  8. muZer February 9, 2013 / 2:40 am

    Awww.. Lovely and sad.. Beautifully written.

  9. Manu Kurup February 10, 2013 / 9:29 am

    Like a medieval painting, depicting the plain beauty and hidden thoughts of life.

    • soumyav February 10, 2013 / 9:30 am

      :-) thts the true picture which u summarized in few words!

  10. Mridubala February 10, 2013 / 10:03 am

    A delightful dream , you portrayed it without losing its feel , great!

    By the way, please check your FB message too

    • soumyav February 10, 2013 / 10:09 am

      Thank you Mridula ,sure will do so!

  11. Trisha Dey February 10, 2013 / 12:07 pm

    As always so beautifully penned Soumya ji! A very usual chore in our daily lives- standing beside and chimney and getting lost in amazingly different thoughts and emotions while preparing meal! Yet your words made it so unusually romantic!
    And yes, one more thing I’ve to say- Your picture sense which you attach with your poems are just BANG ON!!!:)
    Keep going!!! You’re blessed!

    • soumyav February 10, 2013 / 1:42 pm

      Wow!:-) so many beautiful compliments .its great to read all that what you say Trisha! I actually starte dit on a romantic note but amusingly ended it as a normal routine… kind of seen as a metaphor too! and thank u again for liking the pictures too.:-)

    • soumyav February 10, 2013 / 10:49 pm

      Thank you so much Sir

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