In the river holy and pure,
flowing through the high terrains,
I dipped my spirit into it to bathe
my sins got wiped
having a glimpse of her divine state…
she absorbed the worldly charms with her
carried them forth…
to purify the iniquity…
washing the muck feet
that stepped in her waters…
…soiling her existence in
imageries.
Quietly she cleanses
the dirt stuck,
revered is her entity
on earth.
In raucous times ,
her flow becomes strident,
vociferously she roars then,
to let the souls hear her agony,
finding her children
in cark off shore…
She acts vehemently ,raging
waves to swallow
every stone…
When mankind violates
her flow and course,
bringing disgrace
to the Universe!!
(PHOTOCREDIT:tanmoybanerjee911.blogspot.com)
soumyav 
Beautiful ! Sowmya….again an awesome read…
Thank you Debaroon for going through the lines and liking it!
beautiful!
Thank you !:-)
Your words are always a truly inspiring blessing to read each morning Soumyav, thanks for always sharing your spirits heart with us all! So very proud of your words dear sister…God bless always!
thanks Wendell for the loving wishes you leave here on your visit .
Your writing is always super.
Iam humbly touched MIllie!
Honestly I thought I’d clicked on the follow bottom when I last visited. So please forgive my misguided thoughts…
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“In raucous times ,
her flow becomes strident,
vociferously she roars then,
to let the souls hear her agony,
finding her children
in cark off shore…”
A strong poem with a vivid picture. Above is my favorite stanza.
Thank you Uzo for sharing your favourite lines! Iam glad you liked them!
Beautiful as always Soumya.
Love,
mei
Thank you Mei !
I see the river’s strength in your words !! And Divine she is !!!
Iam glad you could feel the divinity of the strength!
In fact, we ourselves are the River Divine 🙂 hmm? And, the rest is a stimulus to drive us to there 🙂
By the way, love the perspective ❤
and your perspective too was different and good!Britton
Wonderful lines, Soumya.
Thank you dear!
Thank you dear!
Reminded me of one nature poem from my language. Except that yours is created with the intention to see the divine side of nature. Loved it. 🙂
So glad to see you loving it and co relating to another one from your place.
very beautiful
Thank u
it was absolutely beautiful
I had to see the dictionary for a couple of word to understand the meaning really I mean the language was fantastic
it is the state of your heart that makes you write so wonderful such wonderful words
might be the grace of God
yes but your language is beautiful and of a very high literary standards, I mean it for eg: Cark, Strident, very beautiful words giving the exact meaning of your thought
Congrats indeed very beautiful
Thts a gr8 compliment although I haven’t read any of those great writers work… Just an attempt to come close to what I want to express.
but it is really wonderful of you, an attempt to reach the highest standards of literary form in order to express your self great
tere janaal ki tasveer khich ke rakhdoo lekin
aankh mein zabaa nahi, zabaa mein aankh nahi
yehi se hota hai raaz e ishq e mahabbat faash
nazre zabaa nahi, pur bezabaa nahi