UNDER THE SKY !


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Of the whispers that I hear

in music of the wind,

beckoning me!

To fields of swaying joy

under the open sky,

I breathe gayly…

In blithe I close my eyes,

to listen

to your gentle voice…

Amidst the green meadow,

a butterfly comes beside,

to touch and kiss me

a sweet lullaby…

I discover you

in the melody

of  its hummed song…

I get absorbed

and soak my heart

in  memories

of your love.

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28 thoughts on “UNDER THE SKY !

  1. Debaroon January 23, 2013 / 12:20 am

    Ur lines cud b my painkiller for this seemingly neverending night…awesome…

    • soumyav January 23, 2013 / 8:57 am

      :-):-) I will be overwhelmed if my lines can have such an effect of an analgesic! 😉

  2. muZer January 23, 2013 / 2:46 am

    So melodic.. Rhythmic & lyrical. Beautifully written Soumya.

    • soumyav January 23, 2013 / 8:58 am

      I feel delighted that you liked this too! 🙂

  3. Christy Birmingham January 23, 2013 / 6:41 am

    “I discover you in the melody…”, how wonderful is this line!

    • soumyav January 23, 2013 / 8:59 am

      Its nice to see you enjoying the line Christy! thank you

    • soumyav January 24, 2013 / 12:54 am

      🙂 It feels great to see you enjoying!

    • soumyav January 23, 2013 / 10:58 am

      🙂 Ha ha! Thank you Vinay!

    • soumyav January 23, 2013 / 11:39 am

      Thank you for your love Sheri!

  4. drsuraiyanasim January 23, 2013 / 1:35 pm

    How tender and romantic dear! And it has a butterfly in it!!! 🙂

    • soumyav January 23, 2013 / 1:46 pm

      Hmm! for you Suri! reminds of you!:-)

      • drsuraiyanasim January 28, 2013 / 12:38 am

        Awwww…..thankyou soooo much! You are a dear! 🙂

  5. Miles To Go January 23, 2013 / 6:12 pm

    The thoughts are so gentle and yet powerful. Having a quiet moment to just listen to the breeze or to ‘feel’ what cannot be felt in a fast-paced world — it can be life-changing sometimes.

    • soumyav January 24, 2013 / 12:55 am

      Very truly caught the real gist of the lines! Thanks for being here and the beautiful thoughts

  6. JasmineKyleSings January 23, 2013 / 6:38 pm

    Another beauty! How are you not giving the integral poem?

  7. Britton January 23, 2013 / 7:44 pm

    Captivating. Lovely. ❤

    N a special like for the image that u've uploaded here.

    One more thing (sorry if i am wrong), in the 6th line is it "gayly" or "gaily" ? 🙂

    • soumyav January 24, 2013 / 12:49 am

      Thank you ! and thanks for te image ! it is of shillong in Meghalaya! Its gayly..( in a joyful manner)

  8. VIGIL KUMAR January 23, 2013 / 9:10 pm

    Poem with fluttering wings & profound worship to nature… well done!

    • soumyav January 24, 2013 / 12:50 am

      Thank you sir for precious comments!

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